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Reviews for: Deflower
Maverick87
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Self-destruction is a art form, and you are one grand teacher.

Realism too, which I love more than anything, if they made Sonic the Hedgehog short story collections, I wouldn't even hesitate to include you.

You're so refreshing to the norm. Thanks for making my night tonight. I'm estatic.
Sweet Valentine Vampire
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Wow. This was absolutely indescribably and mind-nimbingly amazing. I cannot honestly say anything negative about this piece. It turns and twists inside your brain and leaves a hollow space that it makes its home, so you will always remember it.

This is the perfect story - my favorite kind to read.

Amazing work. Bravo.

-Sweet Valentine Vampire
Afro7hundr
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
I used to be so miserable. Happiness a long given up dream. Yet in my darkest moment, scarred beyond recognition... I now see the funny side.

Now

I'm Always

SMILING
evilbeing
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
Yummy
John Bone
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
wow...
my hands are shaking while im typing right now i barely managed to finish it b4 having to shake the image that popped in my mind... im a hopeless romantic and the whole time i was reading this i just felt like becoming part of the story and ease the pain in that broken soul... you have a gift here my friend...
embrace it.
So like a Rose
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
You managed to strike that little chord in this chilled heart of mine.

It's so deep, so real that I could feel the angst and suffering of poor little Amy Rose.

Indeed...you do come up with some of the most insane things Cornwallace. It's a good thing that stuff like this never happens in reality...cause that's just crazy.

Keep up the excellent work, I'll be watching and reading your work.
Starfire201
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
I'm not sure I even want to know how you come up with these. Very, very unnerving.
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