The ending was so beautiful! Another great piece of story that warms my heart.

wow, this was truly and amazing story.

...So incredibly profound and touching...

That's all I have to say, really; I just really love your stories, which all go so deep in such a beautiful way.

Oh God... I have read the whole story and I seriously love you, man! :D At least I love your writings ('cos never met you, heh')

Your text is so...rich and it really made me thinking. I am "religious" and I believe in God, so it was interesting to read this (and all stories including faith etc.). I have to admit, I didn't understand everything (English is not my mother language), but the most important parts I did.

I am an Axel-fangirl and somehow he fits to the role of priest, though I'm glad he is not "perfect" ;) All the characters have their reasons to be in the story, there are none without a reason and that's not sooo common in fics I have read so far.

Love Demyx and Zexion as a pairing but they are that almost every time so it's good they aren't in this one (or am I missing something?)And AkuRoku is love, so...;D And you really made their love story tragic, but not in a common way, I think. Points for the different kind of story line! :)

All in all I really enjoy reading this and it really pushes me to write better stories myself. :) Btw I have seen the picture in DA and you really have got the spirit of the picture in your story.

Gorgeous. Your writing is beautiful, I loved reading this story, it made me giggle (Zexion's "Stop that, you silly fool, don't be stupid! That is a book!" is something I would say and I found it highly amusing), it made me think about religious things which is very unlike me and I cried. Which is the ultimate sign of a well written story. I think this was a wonderful idea and it gave me lots to muse about. I'm so pleased that Axel was there to greet Zexion at the end, to forgive him, let him know that he did nothing wrong. Thank you for a wonderful read! xxx :)

'Roxas remained within his grasp, ill at ease, but… only because the sensation of touch was so very unfamiliar to an angel of death.'

I absolutely love that line. It has so much hope in it. Even though we don't really find out what happens, I get the feeling that it was something good. ]]

This fic was amazing. Thank you so, so much for writing this!

This is amazing.

I'm not all that religious, so I can't exactly relate to this but it was beautifully written. And it was because of that, that I kept reading. The whole thing was just one big plot twist, I could never see what was coming next, and THAT is the mark of a great story.

I have seen the picture that inspired this story, and I have to say you really captured the emotions in it. I'm seeing it all in a new light now after reading this, and it's almost like the picture is now based off of your story.

By the way, while I'm at it I just have to say, I've read some of your other stories as well and I love them all. You're a great writer, never stop!

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So beautiful.

I'm not a deeply religious person either, but I do discuss such things often with people who are and I found your take on everything very realistic as a real religion. It also held that certain awe that comes when a character really truly believes in things greater than themselves, but also the shame and twisting emotions that come with giving up that greater sense for something different.

In short, bloody brilliant.

-kit

aw, i was practically crying at the end, you wrote it so beautifully it hardly seemed sad yet it was really sad! im not making any sense here i just wanted you to know this story really touched me, and i love your work, more?

*wibbles*

Oh god this was so good. The language and rhythm of the descriptions was absolutely beautiful. ANd the resolution and the characterisation! Of course Axel is obsessive!

*bows before you*

Oh, this was quite a good story. I felt so bad for Axel at times, he knew he was losing it but kept going. It's all because Roxie is so lovable :3 Great job, now I move on to another one of your fanfictions lol

This is, honestly, one of the most beautiful things I have read.

I empathize when you say you don't have a lick of religion in you - I'm the same way, but that doesn't mean I don't have a fascination with angels.

Really, this is -beautiful-.

Thank you so much for sharing it.

:]

- Anon

This was completely entralling. From beginning to end i was hooked. There were only a few things i wanted to read more of, Demyx's relationship with Axel and when Axel met Roxas was so short! I only wish that particular scene was a little longer and explained a few other things that Axel obsessed over. This story was however very amazing. I've never been this excited over a fanfiction and it makes me very happy. Very good job!

So I'm pretty sure I'm like...in love with you or something.

I don't even know enough words to BEGIN to describe to you how I feel about this story. And I'm normally picky with things I read, fanfiction or book wise- I don't joke about these things, home skillet. :0

This was...for lack of a better word, beautiful.

Rawly, beautiful.

I DON'T CARE IF RAWLY ISN'T A WORD, I MADE IT ONE.

:D

-LOVE, NEPTUNE.