 bbmcowgirl 2009-11-23 . chapter 10Sorry to see this story end but I'm so glad you only plan on doing 'alive' Ianto stories. They are the only ones I read. Looking forward to more.
Judy |
 Dragon77 2009-10-08 . chapter 7Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. |
 Dragon77 2009-09-22 . chapter 6Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon. |
 Dragon77 2009-09-02 . chapter 5Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!! |
 IndeMaat 2009-07-10 . chapter 2Good question. Still loving this story.
Tiny nitpick: the naration mostly refers to Olivia as Olivia, but on two occasions as Liv. That kind of threw me. My first thought was that another person had been introduced into the story.
Oh, and I think I saw two typos. "of everything" that should be "on everything" and there's a "the" that should be "they", but I forgot where. |
 IndeMaat 2009-07-10 . chapter 1I like this story. The plot is interesting, the characters sound in character, and it is well written.
One thing threw me from the story, though. That was the use of Farhenheit to measure body temperature. That unit is not used in Britain any more, at least not officially. Martha is a medical professional, she would take a note that the body temperature should have been in Celsius. |