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Reviews for: Ghosts of the Living
Jabbuhwock
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Oh, this was great. Especially loved the 'the unspoken chord humming between them'.
theHuntgoeson
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
This is superbly written. Every mention of "her" and "she" in italics is like a hammer stroke, nailing home Gene's overwhelming sense of guilt and grief. All interspersed with his thoughts of Sam - well done for bringing up that Crane moment. Wonderful.
XTimeGirlX
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Great story, I cried at the season 2 finale! Boo hoo...really lovely story, very swet. Are you planning on more chapters, you have put complete but I would be interested to see it extended. One thing, I did wonder why you put all the pronouns referring to Alex in italics? I presume you wanted to emphasise it but it seemed a little odd in places but apart from that it was really lovely story, well done! X =D
DI Alexey 'Lexeh' Drakey
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
lovely,
it made me cry.
great, please tell me your making more chapters.
please
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