That felt... Abrupt? It ended a bit quickly.

Mrry Chrsms. _

I liked this chapter and the 'NEAR YOU BETTER TO HECK GET SOME NEW CLOTHES' chapter. I was about to panic when I thought you were going to make him get new clothes. O_O

Seriously. I like, died. XP

It's a shame you don't like Near...but oh well! Nice story! _

Oh my, this is such an adorable story!

i usaually dont like ocs either, but this was reeally good. i read alot and i swear this is the best! your really good. have a nice day

This truly fascinated me. I'm not sure what else I can say besides that except that it was cute, touching, definitely realistic at points, and overall a really great piece of work.

I must say I loved the name you chose. 'Web'...I've read a few fanfictions where OCs turn up in the background or even star like in this one, and I think that it is the most original name I've come across. Quite appealing for some inexplicable reason.

The part where she puts M&Ms in her mouth to stop herself talking was an endearing trait too. You've created a character that is as original and quirky as some of Obata-sensei's own. Good job. :)

Kawaii! _ Loved the fluff. It was a good story and went at a steady pace. Great job! :)

Altogether now: Aw...

I loved the ending! _ So incredibly cheesy, but I'm a sucker for cute Christmas endings. Anyway, you pulled this off really well, and away from the Mary Sue Zone, and I loved the awkwardness between them. So cute!

In short- well done! And it was a nice length, too.

Aww! I loved the ending! It was so sweet!

Great job! 3

Aww so cute. Btw it's not moving to fast I promise. Near's such a cutie and also DOWN WITH KIRA!

Amazing, you can pull off the serious style too? Haha what can't you do. It was very, very good and kept me interested too. Great job.

heheh could Near have a love rival now? XD and what is Web's gift to Near? A plant maybe? *gasp* Does he have a gift for her too? Can't wait to find out 3

Oh... I wonder how Near would feel if he saw the kiss?

Oh, I think this story is quite nice. I like the pacing of it and the characters are portrayed well. Keep updating cause I'll be keeping track of it. (BTW when I saw the title I was like WTH? But eh, whatever) :)

Hehe... I can't wait till the next chapter!

Update soon please!

Sakuragawa, since you have disabled your pm-ing device thingy i desided i would just comment on your comment. yes, sorry about the clothing descrpition, it was in my original notebook and *sigh* i'm sorry i just needed to stick that there. also, when i wrote "speaks the person who did this to me" i was originally going to put says there, but i had a feeling a used that too much so i put speaks there instead, sorry that it bugged you.

also, in the other sentence i put "now" instead of "not", and so i'm going to edit that.

also i, since i'm a complete eager beaver, posted this without proofreading, even though that was the first time i'd ever done that. thank you for the criticism!