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Reviews for: Mithrin VIII: The Brightest Stars
Marius The Roman
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Wa!
That's so sad, and moving.
"You will die.
And I fall."
Did I mention Wa? :(
Beautifully written as always; Tolkien would be... Well, I wish I could say 'proud' but let's just say 'rivalled,' shall we? It's beautiful.
If this is to be the second last installment, can the last one end on a slightly... optimistic, note please?

Also, I've been wondering, since I'm such a nice reviewer...
Couldyoupleasewrite'theconfessionsoftheteacup'for me?
Please and thankyou,

Marius.
tmelange
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Very moving. Bravo!
baby green eyes
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Noo..so sad.."You will die" *gasp--shock of the century* No really, so so sad. And Im assuming that first figure was Lord Elrond? (Correct me if Im wrong, Im totally cross-eyed, my nephew is screeching his butt off) And second on is Estel? Or..both the same person?? Cant think right now. But this was a sad, short piece. AWW. CANT WAIT FOR NEXT ONE! But am very thrilled you updated. Tres thrilled indeed. MERCI BEAUCOUP, MON AMIE!

~BGE/Jellybean
TheBoltShapedScar
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Nice touch to bring Arwen into the story, I really like her!
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