I really love this! It's the first YW fic I've ever read, and it's certainly given me a good frist impression!

Hey, I think I've read this before...

God, I love Ed. And the Song of the Twelve. I'm so glad you chose that book to elaborate on, it's definitely my favorite.

Okay. Details. "I just twitch a little when someone says my name" was hilarious. I'm convinced that the mind-connection thing would work that way. Since that's apparently how it works with the Lone One and all... (It never says that specifically in the books, does it? I don't remember it every doing so... Either way, though. (What is this 'it' I'm talking about anyway? What a strange way of phrasing that... I suppose 'she' would probably be a better term. I could go back and change what I wrote, but it's far more fun to leave this overly long parenthetical comment inside a parenthetical comment instead.))

I'm a fan, once again, of your kiss scene. I appreciate that you're able to describe both the mind-swimming thing and what's going on physically. I liked that about all of their kisses in When Pigs Fly, too. That you touched on Diane Duane's mental-swimming thing in their first kiss, but then also had the normal everyday people reactions going on too. I'd certainly be convinced that you know what you're talking about! :P

Wow, I'm not really a fan of all this scroll-to-the-top nonsense. Remind me never to leave such a long review again. It does things to my poor review box.

I know what you mean about the knowing the story's being read thing... You get the hit count, but no way of telling if they just read the intro and then got bored, or if they got to the end, or what. That's the nice thing about chaptered fics... I'm eternally sorry I didn't review the first time I read this. I'm not sure why I didn't, cause I've been reviewing a lot more lately than I ever used to. Maybe I was falling asleep or something. We'll go with that. Please forgive me!

Anyway, thanks for doing my research for me! :D :D Hope to read more stuff from you soon. Preferably something Young Wizards... (Can't promise I'll read any of that Twilight stuff.) ^_^

i like it!
very good!

Brilliant! I like how you used the line from the song to wrap up the story and think this story is paced well and not OOC.

Hope to see another one shot soon! ^_^

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

aww, thats so cute, i loved it

So sweet. I can't resist Kit/Nita, especially when Kit is comforting her. =]

This was very good. I like how Nita sort of...segued her way into telling Kit that she liked him. So sneaky of her. =]

And Kit's line: "Neets, did it ever occur to you that you're -worth- that much?" was awesome. *sigh* I totally fangirl Kit, it's quite sad, actually.

Anyway, great story. =]

Wow, this was good. I like it. Poor Nita, feeling all guilty... poor Ed. I felt sorry for him. Not because he died; I bet he was glad he died. I felt sorry for him because his existence was so miserable at times, and he had no real way to change it.

it is a very sweet story. Great writting.

Nice! I like this story. That was the first Young Wizards book I read back in high school, and I've always loved it. The day after, were they still at the vacation home? I don't remember. I'm going to a 4th of July gathering, and can't check at the moment. Good story, anyway.