Oh, wow! I love this! Just... Marvelously done.

^^

I like where this is going, but I hope there are still some challenges yet to come!

Loved the story. I 'm glad that Jon and Cassandra got together in the end.

This was a very well-written and interesting story. I loved how you portrayed Jon and Cassie's relationship and everything they had to go through. Thanks for sharing it! I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

Great story, brilliant interactions, please write a sequal, I'm glad Jack's started to accept this.

Very good chapter. I enjoyed reading this story. It was well written. You are a talented writer. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your masterpieces in the future.

Just read through this story and think its great, Jon's tension between his memories and his new self seemed just right and I like the way the two misfits came together. Also I think Jack and Jon would accept each other and like the way they talked at the end. Thanks for taking the time and sharing looking forward to the next story.

Loved the ending so sweet
Jack and his clone/copys were always funny
to see its like he can't get along with his self.

Sweet chapter and a nice ending to this story. So glad you have so many wonderful ideas. Means I'll get to enjoy ready a lot of great stories. Thanks.

Wonderful.

I enjoyed the story. I wondered if Cassie had noticed Jon's slip-ups when mentioning Daniel. I'm glad to see she's not as dense as she appeared to be :) I would have expected more conflict from her when she found out the truth since Jack is a father figure for her, but I suppose since she knew something was up and since she has so much weird stuff in her own background that it was believable enough. A good story regardless, and I'll be looking forward to the sequel!

I knew it! I knew she knew. I knew it.

Anyway . . . much love for this story.

Thanks :)

Book 1: Finished. Let's see what will happen...
*Applause*
Amazing.

lovely lovely ending. you never disappoint. :D great job. :D