Please update! I love it!

Pleasepleaseplease update it! I love it!

Hizashi seems so nice. Hiashi's such a meany... Please update!

Took me some time, but here I go:

Firstly, this seems kinda rushed to me. Meeting through that song they both knew was a nice idea, but it all seemed to be happening really fast. Also, as for two people who barely met each other, Jordan and Hizashi seemed to be far too open around each other. You don't let people you've just met call you by your first name (normally).

Nonetheless, I love Hizashi in this, he's so sweet.

Secondly - good thing that you remember they speak different languages. However, I suppose Hizashi should know the names of dishes (since they're in his native language) and Jordan could not understand Hiashi's remarks (I'm sure he'd speak Japanese and Jordan's Japanese seems to be average for now).

Oh, and one more thing - it should be obvious that Hiashia nd Hizashi are brothers, provided they look so much alike. If I were Jordan, I wouldn't be surprised.

Overall, it's a nice story. Kinda rushed, but not really bad.