 oHmYgOdNoWaY 2009-11-28 . chapter 16Loved the last sentence. Hope they turn out alright! Update soon! |
 gg 2009-11-27 . chapter 16 update soon please! amazing chapter, amazing story! |
 Celestialuna 2009-11-16 . chapter 16good chapter! |
 deisegirl 2009-11-13 . chapter 16Yay another chapter :) awh poor Harry, and Sirius. Looking forward to more :) |
 jogger 2009-11-12 . chapter 16Well, thank you so much for this update, I was really missing this story.
Poor boys, i am really rooting for them both!! You have once again captured Harry's 14 year old self, all the pain, disguised as blustering bravado. I just wanted to take him in my arms, but I don't think he would have let me, LOL, or even Sirius! He just doesn't have a clue how to reach out for help, does he? I am glad you promised, in your AN to give them a happy ending...I am counting on it!
Sirius has all the right instincts to be a fine Dad, he just lacks confidence! I hope he can stay strong for Harry. Thanks for a wonderful story. |
 Dzem 2009-10-29 . chapter 15Oh...My...Gosh! This is probably my all time favorite Sirius, Harry fic!! I was so absorbed into it, that it felt like I was actually reading a book. I got so caught up in the emotions and the personalities. There were times where i felt Harry's pain so much that I was hurting. And when Harry was not understanding to Sirius's pain, I wanted to throw a book at him! I absolutely love how hard Sirius is trying. Now, Sirius must fight even harder and deal with more grief. Poor Harry can't seem to catch a break. I'm interested in seeing how this is going to mess with him mentally. Apparently Sirius is seeing some sort of therapist. He should think about getting Harry one hehe. Excellent writing, great spelling, awesome grammar. I've only noticed small mistakes here and there like words missing or small words that didn't fit. Still, amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to go insane waiting for it!
Keep up the great work!
D. |
 misty-n-cole-luv-padfoot 2009-10-26 . chapter 15Another wonderful chapter!! You're story is the best!! I cant wait till the next chapter! I check like every day for the next chapter. I cant wait to read more. Please update soon! |
 awesomechick 2009-10-18 . chapter 15 can you please update soon? |
 AprilUnderground 2009-10-04 . chapter 15Yay! THis is going smashingly! I'm curious to see what happens next :3
Keep your pen sharp!
AU
(This is 250 by my count, 1/4 of the way there!) |
 brynncutcliffe 2009-10-03 . chapter 15:O
SAD FACE! D: D: D: D: D:
please update soon! |
 brynncutcliffe 2009-10-03 . chapter 14yay! short but sweet :D |
 HarryJamesPotter-Black 2009-10-03 . chapter 15Wow, that was very confusing chapter – I’m entangled. Why they’ll take Harry away? What’s wrong? It’s really strange – I’m dying to learn what’s going on!
I hope that Harry will trust more to Sirius in the future – it could be easier for them if they could use some family comfort. Their alienation makes the things harder for them (and for us, the readers). So… hopefully they’ll reconcile and figure out a way to go out of this situation.
Can’t wait to read more – so please, please, don’t make us suffer and update soon!
Iva |
 brynncutcliffe 2009-10-02 . chapter 13:D
awesome, as usual |
 brynncutcliffe 2009-10-02 . chapter 12Great! :D
poor harry and sirius tho ! :(
anyway, i have a small suggestion; i think you should take the time to read over your chapters for typos, or get beta to review it for you. You occasionally leave out a word in a sentence.
Don't take this as a criticism though, I'm just trying to help! I am really enjoying this fic :) |
 brynncutcliffe 2009-10-02 . chapter 11you're amazing, just to let you know. :) |