Nice little Doctor Who ficlet. If you went into more detail, you could probably expand it to a chapter fic, but it's adorabel as it is and I rather enjoyed it!

GROOVY GRASS FIC!
Twas vair vair interesting, emotional and had FABBITY FAB characterisations! I luurved your cheesy nachos and marvy descriptions, mingled with the wisdomosity that you used to describe the characters' feelings! A vair great first fic, and I'll be looking to see more from you!
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