oh please write more!
please!
it's an amazing story!

great story! update soon

update soon please!

Really good plot and characters are quite in character. Update soon, please, please...(and so on.)

This is really good, please update it as soon as possible.

Leo14658

Great.
And so much more that can't be said from me now, cause it's 3.20 in the night over here in Germany and I can't think straight.
Probably too much pepsi and the Beatles blasting my brain out of my ears.

Hope you won't be disappointed from this more or less reticent review.
And I hope we'll be able to see an update for this soon.

Pia

Captivating

*gasp* That. was. awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
~Belle~

Aughw so interesting. Such a unique lil plot, it mashes together so well yet so against (which makes it well. like friendship and the assassinating <3 ) keep this bea-yewtiful stuff up. i can wait for a update!

I love that song

"they was twisted": 'were'

I was totally expecting Artemis to be springing a trap. It's the kind of thing he would pull off.

A good start, looking foreword to more.

that's so evil...

Oh. My. God.
You have to update, and soon! Is he dead, is he not dead? Please, update!
Liris
x

weren't they monitoring ARtemis? thus they woudl have a good idea what he would look like?

Hm, I like it. I didn't expect that either. I'm lloking forward to reading more!