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Reviews for: The Shaman Celebration and Morty Investigation
Sunny Lighter
2009-11-25 . chapter 2
sound interesting, can't wait for more
Lolita07
2009-11-15 . chapter 2
really liked the story especially since it actually has scenes from school ! XD really like and please continue the story!
Prats 'R' Us
2009-10-21 . chapter 2
both Chapters were good, I would like to se how it goes, are ther any pairings?
under the stars tonight
2009-10-18 . chapter 2
i dont review often but i decided i will be your first review :)

anyway, first of all, i usually dont watch the dub version of an anime so this is a little different for me but i know all their english dub names anyway so its good. im curious to see what will happen when they go to apologize and with a shaman party right around the corner ;)
the only thing is, i think you should put quotations around the text when someone is talking. it makes it feel more like a story and less like a script.
anyway, keep writing and keep up with this story. i wanna know what happens. :)
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