 under the stars tonight 2009-10-18 . chapter 2i dont review often but i decided i will be your first review :)
anyway, first of all, i usually dont watch the dub version of an anime so this is a little different for me but i know all their english dub names anyway so its good. im curious to see what will happen when they go to apologize and with a shaman party right around the corner ;)
the only thing is, i think you should put quotations around the text when someone is talking. it makes it feel more like a story and less like a script.
anyway, keep writing and keep up with this story. i wanna know what happens. :) |