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Blazorna aka Kamen Rider Thorn
3/22/10 . chapter 24
great chapter, though I never saw Erik's expulson coming... that got me off guard. keep up the good work! grammar and spelling are excellent. I'm a little confused though how Raz escaped/won the fight with Rito.
AllAroundAnimeAndTokuFan
3/20/10 . chapter 1
Hey I was just rereading the first chapter and I wondering if this Daiki Kuto character you introduced, is he just someone you threw in to introduce a character or is he even important to the story at all.
leath
3/17/10 . chapter 24
Schway, Erik's back. But out of curiosity, how can the YuKivat belt exist off of Erik? The only way it should appear is when he's wearing it. Besides that slight anomaly, very sweet chap.

And incidentally, welcome back.
Zeltrax541
3/17/10 . chapter 24
OW, man! Ryker expelled Eric, and even after Augen freed Eric from Kiva The First!

I cannot stand for this! I hope, in the next chapter, Eric is reinstated into the Academy and kicks Kiva The First's and Frantz's ASSES!

PS: Nice chapter, but didn't like the ending in a way.
AAAATf
3/17/10 . chapter 24
Hey great to have you back, and i know ryker did that to protect the other students but i still cant help but think "Man, what a d**k"
Signas517
3/15/10 . chapter 2
this is so cool, if this became i live-action series i would want to be in it.
jmasta32
3/13/10 . chapter 10
New Rider for you, a rider to combat Lucifer

Name: Ryan Desmond

Rider: Densetsu

Age: 19
Rider ideas
3/3/10 . chapter 1
Hey if you are still accepting Acadamy or Tournament Kamen Rider Characters

I have 4 Characters for you

Name: Ricky Feltner

Rider Name: Kamen Rider Nexus

Age: 19

Height: 6'9

Weight: 235lbs (mostly Muscles)

Interests: Listens and play's music

Personality: Simular to Jaden Yuki and Yusei Fudous from Yugioh GX and 5D'S

Rider System: It is simular to the decade and Deind units except instead of rider card he can summon Metal heroes characters, Mystic Knight Character's, Tomica Hero: Rescue Force heroes, Tomica Hero Series, Madan Senki Ryukendo, Garo, and Guyver.

he also has a nit devive that lets him summon 12 different creatures called Battle Beast.

Name: Alex and Tamra Smythe

Rider Name:Kamen Rider Double

Age: 16(there Twins)

Height: Alex: 5'7 Tamra: 5'5

Weight: Alex: 193lbs Tamra: 113lbs

Interests: Alex: Fighting Tamra: Shopping online

Personality's: Alex: energetic and eager to fight Tamra: a typical Valley Girl some what like cordellia in buffy

Rider System: same as Kamen Rider Double

Name: Teal Ferris

Rider Name: Kamen Rider Skull

Age: 17

Height: 5'7

Weight: 213lbs

Interests: Reading Mysteries witch help with his mysterious side

Personality: a loner

Rider System: Same as Kamen Rider Skull

Name: Tyrone Hayden

Rider Name:Kamen Rider G

Age: 19

Height: 5'9

Weight: 189lbs

Interests: studies wine makeing

Personality: calm and eager to fight

Rider System: same as kamen rider G

If you use Them please email me at

Thanks and you are a talented fanfic writer
Shoyro
3/3/10 . chapter 23
(remember me from Youtube?)

This is a great story. Truely original and can be a great tv show if made. I so wish I discovered this fanfic sooner.

I came up with an OC rider that I hope you can use in the main storyline as a protagonist.

Name:Jackie "Jax" Shirogame

age: 19

Gender: Female

Rider: Twilight

Rider appearance: Similar to kamen rider Psyga in appearance without the photon streams and helmet and uses a modified Gaia Driver for henshin. helmet looks like W's but just one color and no line in the center. primary colors are black and gold.

Cycle: Dusk Runner: same model as Accel's cycle, the Diablossa, but is silver and snow white in coloring.

Rider system: Modified Gaia Driver (Twilight Buckle) that uses Gaia memories for Twilight's Dopant forms (ie: Magma, Nazca, Liar) while main gaia memory for Kamen Rider form is called the Dusk Memory (smooth kind, not the bony dopant version.) Twilight Buckle also has a slot that can be used for a few vent cards. the vent cards can only be used in Rider form. Dopant forms have the Twilight Buckle on the waist in the color of the currently used Gaia memory.

abilities and weaknesses: able to safely access the Dopant forms of the Gaia memories she has on hand while in Rider form. also able to manipulate non-lethal energy bolts in rider form. capable of handling vent cards and travel to the mirror world when needed but can only stay there for only five minutes before the Dusk memory is badly strained and is unusable for three days. Dopant forms are susceptible to Memory Breaks.

Gaia Memories, and finishing moves for the dopant form

T-rex (used for pure power), Tyranno Crusher: bites opponent and crushes them before

Triceratops (main dopant form used), Tric Blaster: releases three powerful energy balls

Smilodon (Uses for speed), Smilodon Slasher: repeatedly slashes opponent quickly

Arms (trump form), Arms Blast: turns arm into cannon and releases a volley of energy balls.

Liar (used for stealth and getting info), Liar Deciet: Has the opponent destroy enemies then either makes himself undoeing the transformation and handing the cause over or self-destruct if a kaijin.

Bird (uses mainly for flight and aerial combat), Bird Divebomb: takes opponent to the sky then throws them to the ground followed by a stomp after following the opponent to the ground.

Ice Age (used for water and fire using enemies), Ice Age Strike: freezes oppenents before doing a roundhouse kick on them

Violence (uses as an alternate trump), Violence Collapse: turns into Violence ball and leaps onto the opponent from a great height, crushing them.

Dragon(modified copy, far stronger than the other manufactured ones, but still much weaker than the original, frequently used form), Dragon Fury: releases a volley of fireballs at opponent before doing a dropkick on him

Anomalocaris (for underwater combat), Anomalocaris Snipe, launches teeth needles at opponent then tackles them in Big Anomalocaris form.

Nazca (for speed, flight, and sword skills at the same time, used as a last resort due to the strain it brings), Nazca Slasher: similar to Kamen Rider Blade's jack Form finisher but does it three times.

Magma (to counter ice and plant using enemies) Magma Burst: ground erupts underneath opponent, then is hit by two firey uppercuts

Dusk(smooth version, used for henshin), Dusk Rush: releases a burst of light to blind the opponent before doing a flying side kick or slash with the sword(s) granted from the Sword Vent card.

Vent Cards, AP, and abilities:

Sword Vent - 70 AP: calls a sword shaped like a bat's wing that can split in half for dual use

Guard Vent - 60 AP: summons a sheild shaped like a phoenix

Restrict Vent - 80 AP: prevents any other resctricting vent cards from being used while active, but doesn't nullify ones with over 70 AP.

history: Jackie's parents were murdered by a Fangire when she was 14, so she has a deep hatred for all fangires,as well as half fangires. She attended the acadamy with the idea of being able to erradicate all Fangire from existance upon graduation. She has a strong sense of justice but is willing to kill when fighting any kamen riders who're a fangire or unredeemable in her mind. She is a master inventor and created her own rider system out of a Gaia Driver. she follows the school rules and strictly enforces them. Has a hatred for Kamen Riders Makai, Diend, and Accel as she sees them as the "Condemned Ones", as they are known for not being so positive roles and/or reputations, and seeks out to kill them. The three Vent Cards she has were from her father, who was a kamen rider himself. She purchased all the gaia memories she owns except for the Dusk Memory, which she created herself.

She has been a loner for most of her life, but is secretly looking for friends out of Erik's group and someone else to be romantically involved with. While Growning up, she developed a penchant for solving mysteries of any kind. The majority of the school (teachers and students alike) doesn't like the fact that she uses Dopant forms willingly. she has also been able to create some gaia memories for her Twighlight Buckle, but never uses them.

personality: Serious, Caring towards the innocient, merciless towards a fangire of anykind, strict when it involves the rules, determined, stubborn, easy to anger, yet cautious in combat. really persistant when something catches her interest.

hobbies: painting, investigating, playing music, hunting fangires, creating gaia memories.

Notes if used: She's completely shunned by almost everyone for the fact she becomes Dopants, and is targeted by Accel and Diend due to her large collection of Gaia memories. Has no idea about Frantz being fired because of her lack of friends and that she is an outcast.

that's about it. I hope she's usable. I designed her mainly to give Accel, Makai, and Diend trouble with their schemes, that and/or become a unknowing puppet of Frantz to use in his revenge. Also, I don't think there's many OC Kamen Riders that are designed to use kaijin forms instead of other kamen rider forms, hence the rider name, Twightlight.
AllAroundAnimeAndTOkuFan
3/3/10 . chapter 1
THis is proabably me barking up the wrong tree, but since I asked that you just forget about Kamen Rider Swarm I thought i would Replace my 5th rider with this.

Name: Hibino Tsurugi

Rider:Kamen rider Ryuken-do

age:18

personality:playful and hot blooded, hes always looking for something fun to do, one of his favorite things being a thief's thief meaning he likes to try to steal from other theives(with limited success). The Pack's 4th member since Kamen rider Venn is a loner.

Rider system: New Den-o based, resembles God Rykendo.Activation Calls "Kendo FORM"

Partner:Azure wyvern imagine named Ryuju. Becomes his weapon the Madan Cleaver.

Full Charge:Madan Slash:Blade charges up as Tsurugi perfoms a jumping rider slash,

Kendo Crash:Both feet charge up as he performs a rapid fire bicyle kick.

I really hope this isnt ripping off Zeltrax's rider Ryugun-ou

i just figured since no one else was goona try this that I might as well.

Cant wait till next chapter.
Kamen Rider W
3/1/10 . chapter 23
Name: Devon Colt

Rider Name: Yoko

Age: 18)

Height: 6'2

Weight: 180 lbs

Interests: Chess, watching television, cooking

Personality: lone wolf type quick to anger. Vies the world as filled with people who don't take life seriously,

Rider System: Original. The Yoko armor is actually a living organism in a way. Devon formed a contract with a demon fox, this fox fuses with Devon to become a rider. The fox known as Delsix bonds with Devon by fusing with him performing a soul fusion, After he fuses with Delsix he gains long fangs and tan brown fur over his body to look like a werefox and this also forms the Yoko driver which looks similar to the Kuugas belt except is is pure black and does not change color with each form. When the driver is formed Devon performs hand movements similar to Blades. When he is in rider form her gains a blue silver colored armor with what appears to be 4 armored tails. He is able to manipulate fire in this form and wields the Yoko blade, A pure black Tachi about six feet in length. Kamen Rider Yoko has access to one other form and that is Claw form. In this form the armor turns pure gold while causing Devon some pain causes him to be crouched on the ground on all fours like a fox does, that is because the demonic nature surfaces in him. In this form he likes to slash with the extended claws he gets. Devon does retain some of his human personality, and that is because if the demon gets full possession of him they will both be destroyed
leath
2/28/10 . chapter 23
Whoa, freaky dude. Now I'm thinking it was kinda bad Nobuya's K-Touch and Gaia card were destroyed. Then the Riders might have a chance against Kiva the First.

Nice addition of another Yu-Gi-Oh reference with the Dimension Vent Field cards. I guess I'm sort of doing that too with my Hero riders.
honoomaru
2/28/10 . chapter 23
chapter seemed kind of short don't you think.
jmasta32
2/28/10 . chapter 23
Very well done. Definately did not see the Kiva the First coming. Anyways, I've thought of a way for Erik to maybe combat this force. a new power, the power of a benevolent Demigod from hell.

The Arms Monster Phlegyas, a powerful demigod who was once confined to hell itself for crimes against God, he eventually was forgiven and now acts as guardian for the entire island. He normally looks like a burning, hulking monster with bull horns and a stone crown (for a better description check him out in Dante's Inferno). He is a demigod who will stop at nothing to protect his charge, and stop the monsters who will dare threaten humanity. His Weapon form is that of a giant stone mace with magma spikes. His Bite Attack would involve a lot of magma and smashing.

Please consider!
AAAATF
2/28/10 . chapter 23
Okay there goes my theory.Dude seriously youre starting to worry me with the long time no update thing.Eh whatever cant wait till next chapter

Rider Update:

G: Grand Dive

I figured Connor/Kamen rider G needed some new moves since all he has is the Swirling rider kick.So I came up with a technique that uses the G saber.

Acivates move threw fliping the switch on the G Buckle, red energy flows through suit to G saber and cork screw on end begins rotating to form a small red drill. Drill is shot toward or stabed into opponent locking them into a dimension spike similiar with Faiz, G jumps through Spike and cleaves opponent with the Grand Dive
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