 KAMENRIDER21 2009-10-11 . chapter 10Hey I have a rider that could be Zane's adversary since he an Aozora
Name: Ray Takanashi
Rider Name: Slayer
Age: 23
Height: average
Weight: not needed
Likes: reading, filing
Personality: a 3WA member, he is competetive and cocky, and won't hold back in embarassing some one and he is mainly in the academy for his mission, to eliminate any potential threats to humanity
Rider system: he has a mechanical kivat known as the Slayer Kivat, who sometimes says , "this shall be quick and yet painful" before Ray transforms. His rider form is the black demonic version of Rey still having the blue eyes, he has a wake up fuestle that shatter the chains that cover his arms to reveal black demonic claws known as the demon claws, his finisher is the Hells Claw Execution. You know when rey transform there is the projection of a snow flake, Slayer's version is a circle with a cross cover with thorns and roses
Well here's my fourth oc rider I've submitted, I noticed they are mainly kiva based how weird |
 KAMENRIDER21 2009-10-10 . chapter 12 sorry i meant class, not original for the Kamen Rider Kivara/Kivala and by the way i like negataros coming back |
 jmasta32 2009-10-09 . chapter 6I would like to add a Rider. has anybody noticed that Kuuga has no supporting rider at all? I decided to fix this.
Name: Michael "Cipher" Torous
Rider name: Gokii
Age: 20
Personality: Yuuskue's "thousand talants" with the ability to get along with anybody (which is why i'd think he could be friends with AllAroundAnimeFan's Leon), of Ryuki dorm
Rider powers: has his own arcle, gold in color with a start up suit that looks like kuuga's with a single big horn instead of two side horns, doesn't have a growing form
Forms: Mega Orange, Gokii's form to kuuga's mighty (has rising)
Hydra: Bronze, Gokii's form to kuuga's Dragon with a really long naginata staff (include's rising too)
Phoenix: Silver, Gokii's form to kuuga's pegasus with a senbon bowgun (rising mode too)
Giant: Gold, Gokii's form to kuuga's titan with giant metal fits (has rising form)
Supreme: White, Gokii's final form: can manipulate ice like kuuga can manipulate fire
PLEASE PUT THIS GUY IN! |
 AllAroundAnimeFan 2009-10-09 . chapter 12 Im sorry most of my reviews are long winded which is why i did not put these small details in my last one.
Henshin Pose: Lowers head and places fist over chest and swings out other arm to side with open palm. This gives him a dignified look.
By flying rider kick in his finisher Glory of the pride i meant flying round house kick similiar to Gatack's finisher and right before his kick Scarlet Emperor attacks after all of the other mechanical lions.
One last thing which was inspired by you and Honoumarou
Shining Vent: Mane sticks straight up to symbolize agito's horns splitting as he Chants "Way of the Leo Glory of the King". As you can proably figure out by the name and aspects this is base off of Shining Agitos rider kick but to replace his blue-flame dragon symbols Leo shoots through multiple Scarlet flame lion insignias.
Again sorry for being long winded. I actually hate typing.
Keep up the awesome work. |
 AllAroundAnimeFan 2009-10-09 . chapter 12 Sorry about my last outburst. That was the only time I actually loked at the date. Anywho:
Name: Daniel "King" Leon (No pun intended)
Rider Name Leo
Age:20
Personality: A Tendou Souji like attitude mixed with Kurenai Otoya. So pretty much he speaks with respect to all people especially women and respects himself the most.
Moral Code: Keeps A strict code of honor that he sometimes breaks when members of his pride or his friends e.g. the Hughes Brothers are harmed.
1.Never attack opponent from behind
2.Give opponent chance to transform
3.If oponent is female never attack her head or face
Story: One of the most skilled members of the Ryuki dorm made clear by his posse or "pride" as he calls it. Takes being a lion based rider seriously to the point where when he hears of another lion based rider he immediately sees this person as his greateset rival. But when he heres this riders name is Asuka and thus female he then sets out to make her his "lioness". Take a guess who wont like that.
Note: hs a pesonal vendetta against the Oni tribe for the deaths of his many members of his dorm and greatly despises Lucifer.
Rider system:mltiple ryuki riders put together. Takes a pose similiar to G's victory pose after his rider kick.
Taiga aspects:
Resmbles him the most with on acception of havin a mix of scarlet and copper on his armoe and mane like attachments to his helmet
Ryuki Aspects
Ryuki base vent gauntlet
Imperer aspects
Final vent based off his finisher
Odin aspects
similiar sword vent
Advent:summons his advent beast Scarlet Empereor
Strike vent:Summons claws to his hands similiar to Taigas
Sword vent: summons twin blades to do a combo of damage
Heat vent: Summons the Scarlet fang which is based off of scarlet Emperoers head to shoot a jet of fire at his oponent.
Final vent: Glory of the Pride Summons multiple machanical lions to charge his oppnonent and finishes it up with himself performing a flying rider kick to his opponents head or body. |
 SilverEclipse66 2009-10-08 . chapter 12Good chapters so far. I love how you handle my characters. |
 InfernoZero 2009-10-07 . chapter 12first off i like to say another great chapter. i wonder how the others will react to negataros. the other is i have one more creation to your fanfic (because i can come up with idea but can't write a proper story worth beans.)
name:raine storm(yes she aware of the pun)
rider name:kamen rider Epsilon
age:20
height:5'5
weight: *slapped*
interests:playing jokes on others,working on her sniper rife named the oracle.
personality: acts like older sister to many people and is willing to help anyone who needs it. but loves playing pranks on other students however in battle she can focus on the task at hand. she doesn't like rider kicks (because she feels that they are needed.)
rider system: faiz class code use to active is 0-2-3
also her axel form is diffent in that it cloaks her for 10 seconds instead of clock up effect. looks like faiz but blue foam instead red, and the eyes are blue as well. also her oracle is on her full time.
p.s. sorry for the changes. its just i'm a detailed person and it's my first time creating OC's for a fanfic also i'm not sure i said this but for amaterasu/tsukuyomi charater but amaterasu is fire and tsukuyomi is ice and they rider kick is called meteor dive and the change mid-battle is a fustle. one more thing is the way you tell who in control. lilly is blue eyes and rose is red eyes. thanks and oit still a great chapter |
 vikung-fu 2009-10-07 . chapter 12Short but sweet!
Looking forward to finding out just how Lucifer's going to push things in future but, most of all, I'm hoping for the possibility of a Lucifer vs. Makai fight! |
 honoomaru 2009-10-06 . chapter 12out of this entire chapter all I can ask is: What was that rider Frantz gave to Nobuya? |
 wizard2555555 2009-10-06 . chapter 12Yet another awsome chapter from you, looking forward to the coming ones.
By the way, could I be allowed to make a side story for Academy Kamen Rider. I've had this little idea running around in my head for some time now, and really want it down on paper, but I wanted to ask for your permission first. |
 AllAroundAnimeFan 2009-10-06 . chapter 12 2010! Ill never make it. *-* |
 Zeltrax541 2009-10-06 . chapter 12Awesome chapter, dude!
I love how NegaTaros came back! He was one of my favorite Imagin. Nice that you made a new form available to Yusei with use by NegaTaros: Yusei's new Nega Form.
I love it! If you need any help with pixeling Yusei's StarDust Form and Nega Form, let me know. |
 InfernoZero 2009-10-04 . chapter 9this more of a detail that more than anything.
name:arkkivat-bat the first
parter: amaterasu/tsukuyomi
height:same as all kivat-bats
weight: doesn't know
personality: total loyal to lilly and can calm rose from one of her "berserker" moments changes colors to match who is in control. created by her father
name: requiem of the doran race
parter: amaterasu/tsukuyomi
height: same as tatsulot
weight: not telling punpunpun
personality: playful and fun loving. was the only light in lilly life after her mother's death at the hands of her father killed her and she subpress the memory. allow her to become kamen rider izanagi, which is kiva emperor but is sliver and light purple.
p.s. will raz be able to use the memory gagets and in the show? |
 InfernoZero 2009-10-04 . chapter 10okay i got one more rider
name:lily/rose skyblade
rider name: amaterasu/tsukuyomi
age:18
height:5'4
weight:not telling
interests:flowers,cat/blood,dogs
personality: timid,shy/enjoys the pain of others,lustful
she has a spilt personality disorder due the hash training to her father and indifferent brother has a big crush on raz hrbrid/kamen rider double even if she to shy to say it to him.
rider system: kiva-based rider amaterasu is a red and white kiva while tsukuyomi is black and dark blue. uses a bladewhip amaterasu uses the the sword mode more while tsukuyomi uses the whip mode more.
p.s. if you intended to use leon skyblade/kamen rider ace-o make him evil instead of good because while dori nobuya is a good villain i think he needs a rival/accomplice in his deeds and thank you for using raz it felt great to have a character of mine. also great story so far keep up. |
 pseudorider050 2009-10-02 . chapter 1I love the new chapter. Nega Form is just awesome. I'm writing the first chapter to Kamen Rider Pseudo, so it should be up in a couple of weeks. Thanks again for letting me use Yusei. |