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anon 1/1/10 . chapter 1
Happy New Year! and sorry if this entry a little long.

Name:Alastor Ashford

Rider Name:Honki(Pronounced Hone-ki)

Age:18

Height:5'8

Weight:ripped apart and incinerated

Interests:Observing and Stalking Students,shooting random students with a shotgun/trombone combo from trees for fun.

Personality:Intelligent,with a facade of an nice and caring person that hides his darker sadist 's always seen with a smile on his face and speaks in a calm tone in any has habit of seeing his opponent suffer before killing them and shudders when angrered by something or insulted by has a stubborn streak when he fights and will keep fighting someone until their either dead or someone powerful joins the fight.( or Kagemarou)He has a grudge with Oni Kamen Riders but will not hesiate to side with the Good Oni( ) if this ensures his own survival.

Rider uses a Bone-White Henshin Onsa, and when he henshins,a skull appears on his forehead and he is covered in white flames(his rider element)for a few seconds, revealing just a black Bones emerge from the suit, completing his tranformation into his Oni Oni Form looks like a skeleton and his facemask is framed by jaws and surrounded by 3 Axe Blades each to either finishing,he says "burn with me."

Forms:Honki Gekiyami:bodysuit turns brown,claws form on the hand and feet,a skeletal tail grows form the base of his spine and 6 large spikes grow from his back and fangs appear on his prefers to use his Onizume and Onibi techniques and white flames in this form.

He uses the Ongekibou Doom,two bone white drumsticks with onyx can excute the Ongekida:100 Beats of Death form,where he beats his taiko buckle on his opponent 100 times until the opponent is destroyed, and the Ongekida: March of the Funernal Lord Form, where he stikes the opponent and a white flaming oni Symbol appears and he stikes the opponent again, buring the target in white hot flames.

His secondary weapon is the Ongekikan Shredder,a black guitar with white bone accents with a large serrated blade on one side. He excutes the Ongeki Dan:Death Volcano, where he plays a guitar solo that fire a white hot heat wave at the target, and then stabs the ground, sending a terminate flash like attack to the target, ending in a large explosion.
leath 12/31/09 . chapter 18
Eh-heh-heh. Sorry about that. Missed that bit of fine print when I was making my riders. And I still had some good ideas, even a bad guy (Deathstroke). Ah well, c'est la vie.

Now for the chapter, very cool and nice Final Form Ride for Kagemarou. Just a couple of questions: What final forms will you create for some of Makai's K-Touch riders and what is Eddie's rider? All in all, sweet.
InfernoZero 12/31/09 . chapter 18
great chapter diddy.
honoomaru 12/31/09 . chapter 18
awsome, dude that was intense. I liked the part with Nobuya's k-touch and when keitarou was about to pick up his gaia pass i actually thought he was going to transform there for a sec. you just keep getting better and better which reminds me that i need to keep working to catch up. im not going to lose to you.
jmasta32 12/18/09 . chapter 8
Me again! with a new rider to go with Brutal Legend. Any similarities between my character and the game are not owned and i have no power over Brutal Legend.

Name: Mikey Riggs

Age: 23

Ht: 6'3

Wt: 256 lbs

Eyes: Watery grey

Personality: Kind of eccentric, he lives for rock and roll, mostly Metal. His father Rocky was a famous muscician called Riggnarock, His mother was the mysterious Kamen Rider Succoria. He always is spouting words of somewhat wisdom from great rock and roll stars. Very much a muscular man and is totally bloodthirsty when shredding monsters. His music is comparable to some of the Oni Rider musicians. Kinda swears a lot.

Interests: Music, tuning his guitar Phorce, kicking monster butt.

Rider: Kamen Rider Deuce

Henshin Device: V-Belt Ormagodden vent deck

Powers: Like most mirror riders, he comands a monster to help in battle. His Deuce Visor is located on his right shoulder.

Cards:

Advent: Summons Ormagodden, the eternal fire beast. to know what he looks like, check up the Brutal Legend Opening Cutscene to see

Axe Vent: Summons His battle axe, the Sepparator

Phorce Vent: Summons his guitar which can be used in Super Solo Attacks. The Main one is Face Melter.

Pyro Vent: Gives Sepparator a fire edge.

Shock Vent: Gives Sepparator an electric edge.

Shield vent: Creates a shield the shape of Ormagodden's head

Strike Vent: Creates Godden Claws to slash with

Plow Vent: Summons his Druid Plow Battle Car.

Final Vent: Jumps on Ormagodden's head. Ormagodden screams out and sends Mikey Flying out to drop on you with his axe, called Drop-A-Deuce.
leath 12/10/09 . chapter 17
Accidentally forgot Turtle's Guard Vent, which can summon one or two Shell Shields.
leath 12/9/09 . chapter 17
Okay, that's it. These two then no more until the Oni war is done. (I read way too many comics)

Name: Connor Queen

Age: 21

Ht: 6'

Wt: 166 lbs

Hair: Blond

Eyes: Blue

Personality: Nice guy, women are somehow inherently attracted to him no matter what, he doesn't mean for it to happen

Interests: Archery, martial arts

Rider: Kamen Rider Archer (Ryuki-based)

Henshin Device: Archer Vent Deck

Powers: Hawk Visor is a bow and arrow stored on his back which can fire arrows also stored on his back.

Cards:

Advent: Summons Hawkeye, a golden eagle Mirror Monster strong enough to pick up people in its talons

Sword Vent: Summons Hawk Sword, which can also be used as an arrow

Strike Vent: Adds boxing glove to the tip of an arrow

Return Vent: Adds boomerang function to an arrow

Freeze Vent: Gives an arrow freezing capabilities

Blind Vent: Adds flashbulb function to arrow

Burn Vent: Adds fire powers to an arrow

Bind Vent: Bandages burst from arrow tip on contact

Sonic Vent: Arrow creates intense noise

Shock Vent: Arrow shocks target on contact

Spin Vent: Adds drill tip to an arrow

Blast Vent: Arrow explodes on contact

Grapple Vent: Adds hook and cable to arrow

Target Vent: Increses accuracy

Reload Vent: Restocks arrows

Final Vent: Arrow Storm-Hawkeye transforms into a large bow that Archer grabs. He pulls back the tail and releases, sending a flurry of energy arrows from the eagle monster's mouth.

Name: Casey O'Neil

Age: 22

Ht: 6'5"

Wt: 182 lbs

Hair: Black

Eyes: Blue

Personality: Thrill seeker, very laid-back

Interests: Hockey, extreme sports

Rider: Kamen Rider Turtle (Ryuki-based)

Henshin Device: Turtle Vent Deck

Powers: Turtle Visor located on the strap on the front part of his armor

Cards:

Advent: Summons his four turtle Mirror Monsters, Leotle, Dontle, Raphtle, and Miketle, each armed with a weapon based off of Turtle's Sword, Staff, Stab, and Swing Vents, respectively

Sword Vent: Summons a pair of blue Turtle Katana

Staff Vent: Summons purple Turtle Staff

Stab Vent: Summons a pair of red Turtle Sai

Swing Vent: Summons a pair of orange Turtle Chuks

Shoot Vent: Summons a pair of green Turtle Tonfa that shoot shuriken from the ends

Strike Vent: Summons Turtle Shuko Spikes to his hands

Stealth Vent: Makes Turtle invisible and inaudible

Trick Vent: Summons Turtle clones

Ride Vent: Turtle's Mirror Monsters merge into a battle van

Final Vent: Ninja Time-Turtle and the turtles attack the target at once, either with the turtles striking with their weapons and Turtle with a kick or all five with a kick.

(P.S. Can he have a "Cowabunga" battle cry? That'd be awesome.)
leath 12/7/09 . chapter 17
Ugh, I know I gotta be sounding like a broken record, but I like this rider idea because it sort of gets rid of a weakness in Double (the real one, not Raz).

Names: Robert "Robbie" Raymond/James Rusch

Age: 21 (both)

Ht: 6'1" (Robbie)/5'9" (James)

Wt: 172 lbs (both)

Hair: Red (Robbie)/Black (James)

Eyes: Green (Robbie)/Blue (James)

Personality: Robbie-athletic, jock, not that smart. James-intelligent, very knowledgeable about science. Both-quarrelsome, insecure

Interests: Robbie-sports. James-studying.

Rider: Kamen Rider Nuclear

Henshin Devices: Robbie-Left Fusion Driver, Fire Memory. James-Right Fusion Driver, Atomic Memory.

Henshin: Robbie (left side) and James (right side) fuse into one body for Nuclear. Whichever one puts their belt on first is in control of the body. The other is just floating around in their head, providing advice/heckling. If both put their belts on at the time, they have to be in synch to operate the body. If there is a barrier or substantial distance between the two when one of them transforms, they become a weaker, full body version of their side until the other is close enough for fusion. The two can communicate telepathically when they are wearing their belt.

Powers:

Atomic Memory: Can convert items and objects into weapons for Nuclear to use as long as he is in contact with it.

Fire: Allows Nuclear to shoot fire bolts.

Nuclear can fly in fused form.

2 Maximum Drives:

Atomic: Atomic Firestorm-causes fiery atomic energy to swirl around his right foot before he comes in for a rider kick.

Fire: Fiery Fallout-sends out a wave of flaming atomic energy at the opponent.
leath 12/4/09 . chapter 17
Oh, what the heck. If there's gonna be a war, the Academy's gonna need all the riders it can get. 1 DC, 2 Marvels, and 1 Dark Horse comin' up.

Name: Jay Allen

Age: 22

Ht: 6'

Wt: 160 lbs

Hair: Red

Eys: Blue

Personality: Flirt, fast-talker, tends to put his foot in his mouth

Interests: Running, flirting

Rider: Kamen Rider Flash (Kuuga-based)

Henshin Device: Lightning Arcle with yellow Amadam (belt was struck by lightning when Allen found it)

Powers: Main form is the red Lightning form, which allows Flash to move at high speeds and access Clock Up. Finishers are Lightning Kick and Lightning Punch. Sufficient damage reverts him to the blue Sonic form, reducing his speed along with no Clock Up. Finishers are Sonic Punch and Kick. Should he get gold powers (adding gold lightning bolts to red armor), he is in Rising Lightning form, with even greater speed and access to Hyper Clock Up. Finishers: Rising Lightning Kick and Punch.

Name: Madeline "Maddie" Murdock

Age: 19

Ht: 5'5"

Wt: 'smack'

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Green (blind)

Personality: Strong-willed, doesn't let her disability hold her down, tends to hit people over the head with her cane rather than use it.

Interests: Boxing, gymnastics, reading (using Braille or Seed powers)

Rider: Kamen Rider Dare (Agito-based)

Henshn Device: Altar Ring

Powers: Seed of Agito hyper-sensitizes Maddie's remaining senses to superhuman levels and gives her an ability akin to radar. This is translated into her rider form, making her into a fierce combatant. Energy from the Seed changes her cane into the Devil's Staff, which can be shrunk and used as a blly club and extended on a cable for long-range combat. Finishers are Rider Kick, Rider Punch, and Extension Strike.

Name: Eric "Blade" Hellsing

Age: appears 23, but is actually older

Ht: 6'1"

Wt: 175 lbs

Hair: Black

Eyes: Blue

Personality: Obsessive, hates Oni, Fangire, and vampires, will kill them on sight (Good Oni like Hibiki and Todoroki he spares)

Interests: Hunting and killing vampires and Fangire, guns, swords

Rider: Kamen Rider Nightstalker (Kiva-based)

Henshin Device: Has a Kivat he calls Whistler

Powers: Blade is part-vampire with enhanced strength and endurance, accelerated healing, and slowed aging. However, he has no bloodlust and can go out in the sun. He has no form changes and all his weapons are on his main form. The Blade Katana is attached to his back for close-range combat. The Blade Magnum is on his right thigh and he has a number of metal stakes on his left thigh. Whistler can bite the stakes to charge them up. He has three Fuestles:

Katana Fuestle: Blown by Whistler and then attached to the hilt of the Blade Katana for the Slayer Slash finisher.

Magnum Fuestle: Blown by Whistler and attached to the handle of Blade Magnum for the Slaying Barrage finisher.

Slayer Fuestle: Chains shatter around both legs revealing a pair of black wings on each leg. As he comes down, a stake flips out from each heel to impale the target with the Dark Impale Break (rarely uses on fellow Riders due to the damage it inflicts).

Machine Slayer: Nightstalker's bike which can locate and track vampires and Fangires.

Name: Trevor Broom

Age: 27

Ht: 7'1"

Wt: 225 lbs

Eyes: Red

Hair: Red

Personality: Gentle giant until provoked, which can be kind of easy, believes highly in the paranormal, responds to most bad situations with "Crap"

Interests: Researching the supernatural and taking care of his cats, Liz and Abe

Rider: Kamen Rider Hell (original)

Henshin Device: Right Hand of Doom (can be used outside of rider form as well)

Powers: Right Hand of Doom used primarily for close-range combat. Carries an oversized gun that he uses in his left hand. Has a large six-barreled gun for heavy ordinance. The horn nubs on his head can be used in a headbutt. His finisher is the Ragnarok Fist, causing the Right Hand to glow and heat up.

If you do make any of these hero riders, have Bats be the de facto leader of this group.
vikung-fu 12/4/09 . chapter 17
One of my favourite chapters of "AKR" thus far! Really liking Christina Hearts and her budding relationship with Erik and hatred for Nobuya. It really adds something to all the characters involved.

Also really pleased to see Jyunichi, even if only fleetingly.

However: poor Goldd! (_);
leath 12/3/09 . chapter 17
Okay, very nice. We got the Onigashima Warship coming up. Does this mean the Oni Brothers, Goldra and Silvra, are going to appear?

The first time I saw Kamen Rider Knight (well, Wing Knight), I immediately thought Batman. So I came up with this guy. I wanted to call him Kamen Rider Dark Knight, but he isn't exactly reminiscent of Knight nor is he evil. But I still like it.

Name: Wayne Grayson

Age: 24

Ht: 6'4"

Wt: You really wanna ask him?

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Black

Personality: Dark, brooding loner, very serious, intelligent, deductive, very intimidating

Interests: Training, studying, mystery novels, some detective work (to tick off Raz), brooding

Rider: Kamen Rider Bats (Ryuki-based)

Henshin device: Bat Vent Deck

Powers: Has a number of cards that fit the Batman idea. Knight Visor is on his left gauntlet to slot cards (if you have a better idea, use it). Has 3 small blades on each forearm for close-range combat without cards.

Cards:

Advent: Summons Knightwing, a humanoid bat Mirror Monster with large wings and can attach to Bats to act as a cape (like Darkwing for Knight). Can also transform into a small car.

Sword Vent: Summons Knight Sword

Guard Vent: Summons Knight Shield

Strike Vent: Summons Knight Knuckles

Throw Vent: Summons Knight Blades that Bats can throw at opponents

Grapple Vent: Summons Knight Grappler to right wrist to use like a grappling hook or bind his opponent

Trick Vent: Creates numerous copies of Bats

Nasty Vent: Knightwing emits a high-pitched scream

Find Vent: Locates people and things that are invisible or extremely difficult to see

Smoke Vent: Knightwing creates a smokescreen

Dark Vent: Darkens the battlefield

Shadow Vent: Turns Bats invisible

Swarm Vent: Knightwing unleashes a swarm of small bats to attack and disorient opponents

Fear Vent: Makes the opponent afraid of Bats

Final Vent: Knight's Vengeance-Knightwing attaches to Bats and unleashes a swarm of exploding Knight Blades at the enemy followed up by a side kick or right cross from Bats

Anymore card ideas, please use them.
wizard2555555 12/3/09 . chapter 17
This is getting exiting, looking forward to the next chapter. I'm also looking forward to see what you have in mind for my characters, Pete Joseph and Hikaru Tsukino.
KAMENRIDER21 12/3/09 . chapter 17
Oh, love is in the air well before Jyunichi took Eddie away. I wonder how will this turn out.
InfernoZero 12/2/09 . chapter 17
that was one of the most enjoyable thing i have read. i just have the feeling that if christina and phil start talking. that chris will kick phil in the will kick him very, very hard. but still great chapter dude!
AllAroundAnimeAndTokuFan 12/2/09 . chapter 17
Awesome

thanks for adding Leo beating Akuma

Cant wait till next chapter
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