I love it i love the ending ^^

Oh, Orion's family has grown so big! And it looks like his adventure's about to getting even bigger. :)

Quick question: Might I use Orion in "As the World Burns"? All of the ohana are calling in favors from old friends, you see...:)

I love it good work

nice writing i love it ^-^

Older BOnnie comes closer and closer to her goal...but Orion can take her. For starters, she's outnumbered...and good always beats evil!

awsome i love it 10/10

I love this Chapter vary well writen ^-^

i love it grat work :)

Ah, glad to see Carmen's got a new body ready. And that trip to the museum was fun to read. I always enjoyed going to museums as a kid and still do. I had a feeling you wouldn't really kill Carmen off, you REALLY like her. ^_^ So do I. :D

i love it 50/50 keep writing ^-^

Oh my, I was shocked at the beginning of the chapter. They're DEAD? Yikes.

Or are they? Looks like Orion's learned some new tricks. In the midst of death, there's always life to be found...and now I can look forward to an interesting school trip next chappie! This shall be interesting...^_^

i love it 20/10

that made me cry :( Popper: *Comfeds Orion* it's ok Orion *crys too*

Aw that so cute ^^ keep righting

Ooh, now a baby Popper! Aww, Popper's gonna be happy to hear this. And, ah, I'm only finished with the fanart. I'll upload it soon.