HELL YEAH, MAN.

GARBAGE IS THE FREAKIN' BEST.

oh.

and the story was nice, too ;D

So you know whats really funny?

I read this fiction a hell of a LONG timea ago...i just didnt know that you were you back then.

You had an intersting way to start out. Nudie magazines do tend to bring a tear to the eye of a lot of guys

On a more serious note, you did do a great job on describing squall's more sentimental side...hanging ont to gthings from the times the two have met. Very nicely done.

An intersting question really. Why does someone who has such a naive and innocent look on life really go after teh cold-hearted person and mercanary standing in the corner? Your description of Squall's confusion and his questioning state was brilliant. It fits his profile from the game perfectly.

"He wanted to put that kiss in that box and keep it forever next to his heart and never loose it." Was probably one of the most sincerely touching lines i have come across in quite some time. Just like this fiction it was concise, it was damn good, too the point, and memorable.

Hmm...one issue i do have is the overworkign himself to buy a ring. I mean on the one hand its thoughtful...but its a double-edged sword as far as Rin's feelings during that time. I know such things matter...but Rinoa's not in love with a ring.

Shame on squall for not understanding that...totally at least.

The end of this fiction was a bit rushed...but that cant be helped in a song fic where you are constrained by the numnber of lines there are. CAnt have too much of a gap inbetween versus lest people forget that it is infact a songfiction. I think that makes songfic harder to write which speask to your skills when is ay that this was done incredibly. Not for a first songfic, but for any songfic.

I loved it. It had a smooth feeling to it throughout the fic *though a bit choppy at the end* but ultimately left a good feeling sitting with the reviewer when all is said and done.

Now see more fictions like this (but longer) is exactly what everyone needs. Kudos!

i love it! it's wonderful!

great story great song. garbage rule

o.O That..is the best Garbage song. I love the lyrics! It's a great song'fic.

Yeah! That was great! Garbage and Final Fantasy, very good are soooo great. Write more...please?

I love this story its really sweet.

Aww... That's so SWEET!