Nice to see an actual mystery in the Ace Attorney fandom. You've also managed to include practically every main character! Nice!

Anyway, I find the story to be very engaging. I find it interesting that you chose to jump from scene to scene, skipping the unnecessary "in-betweens". The relationship that you portray between Phoenix and Trucy is also excellent. I tend to forget that she can be anything but cheerful.

I look forward to your continuation of this story!

This is absolutely excellent!! I'm practically on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! Please update soon :)

Mm, still no idea where this story's going, but I like how it's turning out thus far. I wonder what Phoenix's dwindling patience is related to?

Hope you update soon! Thanks for the chapter~

This is rather fun and interesting so far! Can't wait to read what happens next!

Thanks!

Oh, very well written!

I usually prefer trials and actual cases, but this is just so good and interesting, I don't mind.


I can't wait to see what's actually going on!

I really like Nick and Maya's interaction in this chapter :) Morgan's back? Ohh, and the plot thickens XD

Good chapter and excellent writing overall. I can't think of anything to comment on regarding the chapter itself.

You write HoboHodo really well :D really nice insertions of humour here and there!

I may not like Thalassa as a character but I liked your portrayal.

It's getting more interesting at this point. The reader wonders if the dissappearence of Iris & Larry is connected to someone from either Phoenix or Apollo's past. Your building this up good.

This story is really well written and it's sucked me in. Everyone's in character and i want to see what happens next! :D great job and i hope you update soon...

Quite an interesting setup we have here. I can tell I will enjoy this story as it goes on. Are Larry & Iris victims of foul play, is there still secrets surronding Klavier? I will look forward for future updates.

One thing I would like to point out is at the beginning of the scene with Klavier and Phoenix. This line.

iWell, good for him,/i Klavier thought to himself as he worked on a current case. iI ruined his life. The least I owe him is to let him be happy./i

Was this supposed to be in italics? Clarify if that's just an error.