I enjoyed this a lot. This was definitely something Haruhi would do. I hope you write more.

If I had to have a criticism, it wuld be that the story description is very vague. It really said nothing about what your story was about. I would recommend changing it so that it gives a hint as to what the plot is about.

Anyway, looking forward to updates.

Aw...! So cute!! Keep writing like this!! ^^
I love Haruhi and Kyon!

Aw, cute little moment. I'd maybe break down the first and third paragraphs into more, just so it flows better, but other than that, no critiques. They're both fantastically in character.

This was cute. :) I'm not sure what the 30_ways thing is, but I expect I'll enjoy this anyway. I think you've got both characters down perfectly. I wish there was more, but with 29 planned chapters/stories coming up, I don't think it's going to hurt to have them short. Keep it up, and add more soon!

Nice start. I haven´t saw any errors so far.
I am realy interested how this story develops.
The chapter could be longer.
I liked the way how Kyon stood up for himself.
good work

Interesting chapter.

I liked how this played out, I can see Haruhi acting that was quite clearly, pinishing Kyon for going out with another girl, but neither stating nor even accepting the reason why it made her feel as if he warranted a penalty.

My only criticism would be that Kyon's style of voice and monalogue seems too rushed, what I mean to say is his thoughts are coming across to quickly as opposed to the more drawn out disinterested approach that Kyon has, even to more severe situations, there is always still a kind of objectiveness to it.

Anyway, I do hope you write more, sorry if the comments come across wrong.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

kyon is so whipped. he shouldve just acted nonchalant like he always does. i hope you continue with this soon. laterz