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Hello!!!
2009-12-07 . chapter 41
Amazing. Very nice I aways love reading Cary's diary entries. It gives very nice deimension into the story. Seems more really. Just a question? Where is Cary's diary? DOes Spencer have it for memories or is it just lying around, gathering dust?
Kirsti-Anna3567
2009-12-06 . chapter 41
'Kay, I loved this chapter. I am a huge fan of musicals, and The Producers is one of my favorites ;]
As for the Carly development as a character, I'm a bit surprised. I had expected her to get worse compared to the last time we read Carly's diary. I'm happy that she has giving up her anorexia, but then I know that somehow she dies from it... I wonder what happens.
AlexLuvsAirwalks
2009-12-06 . chapter 41
Wow. This chapter was really pretty. I like hearing Carly's POV on things. Hey, u don't worry bout keepin us waitin. things happen! But SO happy u updated! keep it up!
discostick0shalala
2009-12-06 . chapter 41
I feel really bad for Carly. She really is suffering. She can't get her head straight, doesn't know what she wants and is seeing what freddie is going through. I like how you put diary entries to show carpus pov of, not only Sam and freddie's relationship but also her own life and how she involved. I see why Freddie is confused about Carly in the previous chapters now.
Btw, im guessing I'm a twilight-emo wannabe since I love Hot Topic haha
great chapter. You're an amazing writer. This chapter is tense but still has that bit of icarly lift with Sam and Carly's friendship
update soon!
White Firebird
2009-12-06 . chapter 41
Good to see your back! It sucks losing your work like that, believe me, I know. Anyways, another wonderfully depressing chapter. It's so weird seeing Carly like this, but you do a great job with it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Crazii-fan4all
2009-12-06 . chapter 41
this story is really good hope you could update sooner!
Roseheart
2009-12-04 . chapter 40
Aw, I understand. Sorry... Must be worse for you than me. Anyway, I know you'll try your best to get back into things. I won't be reviewing until January first because the holidays are coming first. BTW- Backing up your documents would be a good idea, and now you know!! Good luck, I'll check back on January 1st.
iLuvNathanKrEsS
2009-12-01 . chapter 39
And I also thought iMove Out seemed a bit... rush. I feel almost as dissapointed as for when iThink They Kissed premiered. I was expecting more...maybe a surprise ending like iSpeed Date or the convo. with Mrs. Benson and Freddie being a little more...mature? Yea, that's the right word.

Overall, cute episode. Nice humor and bittersweet moments. Since when does Freddie not care about Vandalism?

Shocker. Actually, not really...Sam's rubbin' off on him, ya know? lol.
robbie84
2009-12-01 . chapter 40
i am backk..sorry dang school i have no time to read fanfics and i love icarly fanfics but yeah its gotten really good since last time i read keep up the good work and ill be a good reviewer again
iLuvNathanKrEsS
2009-12-01 . chapter 40
I just realized I haven't left a review on this story in about four chapters. I feel awful =( so to make it up...

This is getting to be by far the greatest story on the iCarly board that I have read so far. The way you captivate each character and the plots are just amazing. I'm lost for words. I'm really curious to see what will happen next. Will Sam get...pregnant because she threw away the pills? I'm really sorry about what happened to your computer =( That sucks. But things happen, am I right? Don't worry about it, we all understand!
what lurks beneath (forgot)
2009-12-01 . chapter 40
and before i forget, i also kinda didnt like imove out, cause i was hoping for sam and carly to care that he was moving out, and them to persuade him to move back in. i was kinda hoping for sam saying that she wanted him to stay cause it wouldent be the sam without him, but oh well, someday!
what lurks beneath (lazy too)
2009-12-01 . chapter 40
i have a flash drive, it has all the fics i wish i could finish, or start for that matter. problum is my computers flash drives dont work, and it dosent have a typing program. i might be getting one this weekend, just hope it'll install!

and i felt it was kinda rushed, all the super hype, and then it all gets solved in 23 minutes. i just wish that they'ed bring back mrs benson for someother reason then to whump freddie. she is funny. that was actually the oppurtune time for them to actually have freddie mve out of his moms, cause he was still living in the basement, so its not like it would change the show much, just no more mrs benson... i guess i just have a pre-set dislike of her.

i ope that iquit icarly is a lot better, not to say imove out was bad, but it could have been better. i really hope that iquit isnt just a longer version of idont wanna fight, that would just be silly. anyway, i'll now probably be able to read twhat i mised of your sroty, i had a bunch of stuff to do to clean up the house for winter, and every day i put it off cause there was so much to read, i procrastinate a LOT.
XxVampRomancexX
2009-11-30 . chapter 40
I did as well! Hope the next chapter is up soon!
MissSteffy
2009-11-30 . chapter 40
Aww it's ok I understand.
The wait will be worth it cause this is a GREAT story.

Anyways, yeah I didn't like iMove Out much. I thought the main plot was going to be about Freddie moving out, since that's the title of the episode. But it wasn't. It was funny at times but it wasn't the best episode.

I can't wait for iQuit iCarly this Saturday :D
Crazii-fan4all
2009-11-30 . chapter 40
imove out should of have been way batter i expected Sam and Carly to care that freddie was moving but no thanx 4 info!
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