 Basco57 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Ooh, it was hot, and fluffy, AND funny. Like, perfect? Yeah. Haha, loved the little twist there at the end. Holy crappola, I need to read this again. Nice. Keep writing. |
 Thief-Trickster 2009-07-05 . chapter 1Carly sipped on her Mangoberry smoothie and flipped through the list of possible skits to do on the next iCarly segment. She heard someone coming down the stairs and turned around . Spencer was walking down the stairs, his face an odd mixture of amusement and fear.
“Did you know-” he stopped talking, just pointing up, towards the iCarly studio, his voice strangled and uncertain.
She smirked, setting down the papers. “Yes,” she said, fingering the straw of her smoothie thoughtfully.
“Have they-”
“Since halfway through freshman year,” she answered, smiling a little wider.
“And do they-”
“Nope,” she said, grinning now. “They think that no one has any idea.”
“But-”
“I know,” she said, nodding once. “But this is also coming from the two idiots that think that they’re not dating right now.”
Spencer glanced back at the top of the stairs, then turned and looked at his little sister. Finally, he said, smiling in that loveable, dopey way of his, “You’re friends are weird.”
She took another sip of her smoothie, chuckling. “Yeah,” she admitted, “But they’re my weird friends.”
Haha I loved this story!1 |
 mickeygirl101 2009-07-04 . chapter 1heyy!! so first of off, i'd like to tell you that i think you did a wonderful job writing that. I personally felt that it was a little bit ooc, sam on the cheerleading dance squad and freddie lifting weights?, but i thought it didn't manaage to distract from the point you were making. I hope you write more :) |