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SMackedFan
2009-09-07 . chapter 3
LMAO! That was hilarious!

A very fun read :)
SMackedFan
2009-09-07 . chapter 2
Aw, Jessica Aiden Taylor. SO cute :)
x.SodeNoZangetsu.x
2009-08-18 . chapter 3
Lol. Poor Mac and Stella. I'd kill Danny and Flack if they ever did something like that to me and I found out. And haha, Mac's not as tough as he looks! =p
DNAisUnique
2009-08-17 . chapter 3
Eh, in the last chapter's review I meant to say that I adored their baby's name...I got a little ahead of myself and forgot. Oops.

Ooh, the creaking door gives me the chills...and not the good kind. :)

Haha, neither of them wants to go first because they're scared! I can't say I blame them though.

Excellent detail with Stella's hand on Mac's shoulder.

'She pursed her lips and huffed. “Fine. Okay.” She pointed a finger at him. “But if some creepy guy in all black clutching a butcher knife comes after you, I won’t hesitate to say I told you so.”' *dies laughing* Sorry for the bad pun. I can *so* see Stella saying that.

Freakin'-A! I should know better than to read anything 'Halloween-ish' late at night. I'm shaking like a leaf!

Nothing like a little fright to push them together, though. Bonus!

LOL! I *knew* Flack was behind that! Mac and Stella are definitely going to kill those pranksters! :) I'd love to see everyone's reactions. Perhaps a chapter 3-B?

Fabulous work! I can't wait to check out your other fics!

Dana
DNAisUnique
2009-08-17 . chapter 2
Yeah, brings new meaning to 'Labor Day.' :)

I love Stella telling Mac that it's his fault regardless.

"Not worth it." LOL. That's why I'm never having kids. Ever.

Hehe, Stella nearly broke Mac's hand.

I love Stella's roller coaster of emotions. One second she's ready to kill Mac, and the next she's all sweet.

Omg, I *swear* I didn't read the end!! :) Great minds, though, right?

Another excellent chapter! Glad I don't have to wait to read the next one!

Dana
DNAisUnique
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Love the image of Mac sitting in his truck imagining the arrival of the Declaration in NY.

'She chuckled at that and gently patted his hand. “Only you would find that funny, Mac.”' Excellent! Now I'm grinning like and idiot.

Glad she didn't pull away.

Mac's words literally gave me chills! Awesome.

Such a lovely ending! *still grinning so big!*

Dana
lily moonlight
2009-08-14 . chapter 3
Hahahahaha, brilliant!! That was me laughing btw :P I loved it! So, so funny! Oh, i could just imagine Flack and Danny doing that, if only we could see something like that on the show :D I loved the scene setting and the creepiness and how Stella teases Mac about his little army fatigues and not enough candy XD i could totally see her saying that, and Mac being dignified XD Then I loved the comments about the horror movies and so on, and then them grabbing onto each other and running out, fantastic! Looking forward to the next oneshot in this series :D
csi-ncis
2009-08-14 . chapter 3
lol oh ** that was great! I wonder if they thought that they were leaving Flack behind or not?!?! I love that you brought in how they split up in movies!

Labor day is my favorite one so far :) It was cute, Mac ignoring her yelling at him and being all loving on her!!
Berlian
2009-08-13 . chapter 3
hahahaha.. Mac and Stella get a prank;) love it
Andorian Ice Princess-AIP
2009-08-12 . chapter 3
LOL...that was great. Sort of guessed it was Don but that was just priceless and I wasn't sure who else was in on it...haha thanks for the great read once again!
AiP
joannahobbit
2009-08-12 . chapter 3
this was hysterical! i totally called Flack doing something when you mentioned his car but not Danny or Adam being in on it. Great job and I'd love to see you write a second part where mac finds out and maybe even gets 'em back.
cae-prince
2009-08-12 . chapter 3
LOL! Absolutely loved this chapter! You did an amazing job of getting Mac's and Stella's nervousness across. Looking forward to the next chapter... and I'd love to see Mac and Stella get back at Danny and Flack for this! :D

Cheers!
Caroline
Andie24
2009-08-12 . chapter 3
Hehe, that was hilarious. As funny as that was, I could still see that happening on the show. The whole conversation about Halloween made me laugh out loud. :D Great work!!

-Andie
x.SodeNoZangetsu.x
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
Lol. The last sentence made me break out into laughter. =D Poor Stella though! I'm in no way looking forward to what she went through either! *shiver*

Loved the baby's name. Sweet. =)
edwardcullen23
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
That is funny, Labor Day!
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