Cute, but you should space out the dialogue when someone new speaks.

I wish there were more stories on the love these two have for each other! I hope you write more too, though do recheck your grammar and all!

I liked this, it was very sweet.

I was looking for stories about these two and I was glad to have found one that gave a feeling of hope for them. :-)

May I suggest for a beta though? It could use some corrections with the grammar and punctuation.

Thanks for writing this little story. I hope to read more Sam and John fics in the future from you. :-)