This is great! Very much in tune with Johnny's inner guilt. Not nearly enough of Johnny was explored in the book. I almost want to give him a hug here... and this is very Poe-ish. I like it. *grins* And thanks again for all the support with my own fics.

I bloody love this! Why hadn't I seen this fic sooner? It's a very clever idea. I love how we get an insight into Johnny's mind, as he emotionally struggled with what he's done. Love it. A group of crows are called a murder, lol. So good choice in birds.

Great interpretation of Johnny feeling guilty! I felt really bad for him, because he is the type who would feel awful, even though Bob had done horrible things to him and to other greasers.

That was incredibly powerful. In such a short one-shot, you managed to capture not only Johnny's guilt and slight parinoia after the murder, but also the absolute morbidity of what he's done and what's yet to come (or so he thinks -_-). This makes me feel soo bad for Johnny, I want to hug him.

Great job, very well written, and extremely moving. Well done!

This was a marvellous idea.
You really should write something like that more often.

Wow, that was REALLY good. Kind of Edgar-Allan-Poe-ish. I love that there are 12 crows. That's a fantastic detail to go along with Johnny's brief paranoia. Great job!

Liz

This was short but very powerful. The guilt is so apparent, and even though this is barely 300 words, you've captured Johnny perfectly. It's a bit morbid, but he just fucking murdered someone, so morbidness is acceptable.

I wish I had more to say.

Good job. :)