Genesis's line 'I'm a SOLDIER, not a scientist' was really helpful since I have near to none knowledge in biology

I really liked this, your explanation of the degradation process was really good, specially because, in my opinion, it seemes little explicit in the game - you understand that degradation is just a soft way to say they're dying, but stating that they're dying of their bodies' not producing new cells is better.

Voila, and Genesis Rasphodos cracked, like an eggshell.

Beautiful story! I can see the scene just like you pictured it. Really beautiful and heartwrenching.

Too bad you didn't go just a little bit farther with it to the point where Genesis overcomes his shock only enough to get angry and punch Hollander in his grinning face or, even better, throw a Fira at him. Muhahaha!

...decent into his madness... I don't think I read a rendering of this before...

I swear, Hollander in this is a little bitch.

If I was Genesis, I would have slapped his scientific face all the way to Hojo's lab so they could have a little tea party about monsters.

Mind you, firaga would have been a finer, more fitting choice I suppose.

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