finally some decent Jack/Rose!
I was SO annoyed at their lack of interaction in the finale.
SO so annoyed.
I'm a Doctor/Rose shipper all the way, but i love those two interacting and it annoyed me.
That was a great read thank you :)

CHEESETASTICALLY WRITTEN! =P
You kept everyone all perfectomundo...ly in character, and it was a really fab idea.
=D =D =D =D =D

To me your character development is spot on. You take what BBC has produced and take it a step further but with total dedication to the characters. I really like reading your stuff. It seems really true to form.

i loved it...i hated how we never saw a jack and rose reunion in DW...this was absolutely beautiful, fantastic, brilliant (pick the which ever you like)

This is really great descriptive writing. You've got all the characters acting like themselves, their thought processes clear and it's a good idea as well. Ticks every box, well done!