I have just read the first two chapps and I love them, I hart them, they are amazing keep writing :) xx

wow you totally captured the esence of this series this is really really good

I think you have done fantastic , i love the twilight saga books and films so far. lol . what you i have read so far is superb i would love to read it all. i think you are injenious. have you wrote any more to this script? Its makein my own mind wonder. thanks

Ah! I wondered where you were :) Though I can completely understand about college. This was a lovely chapter, as usual. I definitely liked how you reminded us about reneesme being half human. That's part of her I can probably like better (because I've kind of hated her character since she was born). I think she would have a day that the rest of us would consider good, but she probably wouldn't enjoy it. :) I don't know though. Great job!

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I like where your story is headedp-lease continue soon. :}

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This is actually a very nice story saved for after the first 4 books of the Twilight Saga. I am impressed. I actually have a story in my head right now. It is still about Renesme but a bit more action into the story. Good Job!

Wow. This is really good. I haven't read any Breaking Dawn fics. And by principle I dislike Renesmee and think she shouldn't be alive. And Breaking Dawn was a huge dissapointment for me, along with the whole series after a glance back BUT and that is a big BUT (pun intended!) I really love your story. And I love how Renesmee isn't playing that Mary Sue role that Bella did!! I just hope Jake doesn't take on her love sick role.
I will def follow this story. Your rock Pippin!

Hi, Keep going, I am really enjoying your style. I like the quotes you use at the beginning and the Renesmee you are creating. I was going to nit pick about the time lapse, but you explain that later with their trip that took 10 years. That's great because it keeps the reader on his/her toes.
A-J

I love reading this story - you have a great voice down for Nessie, and I really liked when you described how the minds of the family felt to her! Thanks for the playlist - I'm definitely going to check the songs out!

-muzicdreamz :-)

WOW...I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...this is gonna sound totally weird but when renesmee was reunited with the family my eyes blurred up...i guess i am a extreamly emotional person, but i was also really into the story!
so excited to read more :D

O.O Wow, that's a lot of songs! Lol. I usually do the same thing and I find that songs fill in some of the blanks and make feelings of characters more...real, I suppose. I'll remember this and try to listen to some of them!

I really loved the description in this chapter. It was beyond excellent the way you portrayed each of the Cullens to her. I especially loved how close she was to Rosalie, going on how Rosalie acted towards her and Bella in Breaking Dawn. I also really liked her feelings and reactions to Jacob and the kiss. That was great. It was just enough and not too over-done.

Good job on this chapter! :D

Dang woman, that's quite the playlist! I love how you portray Renessme. I think its brilliant. Plus I've hit a block with Dr. Pepper art. So I think I'll wait for you to start on the next one to do anything else. I may do some little sketches or something but not big until then. :D Love you're writing style. You need to write your own book and have it published soon. I'd be like the first to buy it. At least where I live haha.

This is a GREAT perspective on Renesmee! I can tell it's going to get to epic proportions!

Was that mistake in chapter three intentional or accidental? The one where you referred to Jasper and Rosalie as being real twins instead of just pretending? Don't get me wrong, you have every right to change things around if you like, I was just wondering about it.

Also, are you spelling Emmett differently for the heck of it or a simple mistake?

Sorry, I'm nitpicking. Overall, it's a wonderful take. I have been feeling a bit queasy about Jake and Nessie together recently so seeing how your Nessie resolves it should be awesome.