Uh... How long had it been raining severely before the dogs finally found Johnny? Torrential rain does seem to wash the smell away... Pity Doom didn't watch the weather forecast before going to hunt^-^

Also, if the hunter dogs do manage to find a lonely unarmed man in the forest it's not very likely he'll be able to get away alive... unless he by some miracle knocked them unconcsious or was a marvellous sprinter. I do not believe that a person with no supernatural powers, tired, exhausted and above all severely injured can overspeed specially trained hunter dogs, even if he had special training himself. There are things that just surpass human abilities.

And the last thing. A person with artherial bleeding and no applied bandage that stops the bloodflow comletely - and is weakened for some time every 45 minutes - lasts no longer than a few minutes. If we keep in mind thal Johnny was running and, consequently, his heartbeat was quickened...

I honestly love your way of writing and I'm sorry for being harsh - because I know I am - but I am tired of reading unrealistic things like that almost everywhere. Please check the facts first before you write...

Have a good day.

Omg I love all your F4 stories. Poor Johnny...dark side Sue. AH!! Can't wait for your next story!

I love this series! You have interesting plotlines nad great character development. I can't wait for the next installment!

No! It's the evil cliffie! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE write more. You have such a wonderful and original writing style and are so good at making a believable story! When I read your first story, I'd originally thought"not Another Mary Sue for jonny" but she's turned out to be nothing of the sort. You have managed to created a VERY believable ORIGINAL character. Now, use her! I find myself wanting more scenes with her. If your stuck for plot ideas you already have some very good beginnings! How will Sue redeem herself? What happens when Reed finds out about her "darkness" What's Doom planning? Will Dr. Maiden ever save the day?What exactly CAN she do? Will Jonny evry forgive Sue and be comfortable with her again? and who on earth is Dr.Storm? PLEASE write more and know that I will be a faithful reader when you do!

I love your writing style, but just one thing. There's no such thing as blue roses. Just thought I'd let you know, ;)

Sorry it took me so long to read and review! I have been really busy at work.

Another great story! I love the tension between everyone. I hope they can work it out, though. The ending just screams sequel, so of course you have to do it! I can't wait to read it!

this was such a great story. and i definitely needs a sequel. as always, i love the way you wrote the characters. the mixture of action, drama, and suspense is great. siblingness rules. and a cliffhangar ending! let me know if you ever start posting a sequel. i will definitely read it.

This has been SO much fun to read!! XD If you are doing a sequel, you can count on me to read it!! :D

Take Care,
Dark Respite

WHA? that is a HORRIBLE! ending, yet at the same time !AMAZING! i will absolutly be looking for the sequel of the sequel of the original.. lol (i enjoyed saying that)
great job.
i feel so bad for Sue, this new relationship with her brother not able to trust her. and what Johnny must be going through..
and did i mention how CRUEL it was to have the Ben thing in the begining?!? making me think that Johnny WAS dead>> ARGGHH meanie.. hehe.
Thanks for writing!!
-Jelly :)

Great fic!! You wrote it so well and I'm sad now that it's finished. Well, the good thing is that you have to write a sequel. Because... you are writing the sequel, right? This can't end this way. And I can't wait to read more. What it's going to do Doom with their father? And, will Johnny be able to forgive Sue? What will Sue do to try to make his brother to forgive her and get things back to normal again?

Well, like I told you, I can't wait to read more, so, please. Keep writing. We'll be waiting here! (But don't let us waiting too long!!LOL)

Thanks for sharing!

Kanny.

Severely confused, but I suppose its bound to happen. I don't exactly understand the whole 'it' killing Johnny thing, it wasn't very clear, but I can graspt he basis of the plot. I think maybe you should try to edit a part in when Sue is implanted with the trigger to have to kill Johhny and drive her to Doom...I don't know.

A sequel perhaps, would be nice also :)

Aah, I'm sad to see this end, but I'm really looking forward to read sequel, if you decide to do one:)

Ha! I so knew you wouldn't dare...besides it's a lot more fun to torment the siblings with a broken relationship, isn't it? Mwahahahahahaha...ahem.

You must now do a sequel since you left it just completely hanging there at the end. Nope, no arguing allowed. I would demand a specific deadline for you to begin it but since I haven't even updated Cold Comfort in weeks, I can't really justify that kind of demand.

Ben's rock-like armor is so thick, it requires special equipment to hear his heartbeat. Doesn't make sense for Alicia to be able to detect it on her own.

Don't blame the hotshot for no longer trusting his sister.

Woah, I'm really happy that Johnny is alive but, apparently the angst isn't over yet! I hope you do another sequel.