I really enjoyed it, and it was a shame it was a one shot because it definitely had potential to be developed. I loved the twist! Keep up the great work, fantastic one shot. x

Oh a glimpse into the dark and bitter end of their game. Not bad, can't wait for more fics.

Brilliant! You know the way to my heart, Fruity Woman -- through beating-up and love-making! You used the lyrics of the song beautifully. Great job, love!

I'm speechless! I told you that the weird thing about this dream was the fact that it felt so real. Now it actually is! You have made this dream come tru*! WOW! This morning it gave me goose bumps just thinking about it, but now, while reading your story, I felt my heart beat so fast and tears in my eyes. I felt like I was living that dream again. I also love the title so much. Glad I was an inspiration for you to write this.
I wish I had seen that last part though with Tru and Jack in bed ;) How you turned this into a dreanm they were both having.. very clever of you.

I love how you used both my dream and the song in this creative and mesmerizing way.

The dialogue between them also gave me a jolt. since I don't quite recall what they were saying to each other in my dream, but you rectified that... now I know.. lol.

I guess my dream was more than a dream, it was a prophecy! And I'm so glad that you shared it with me and everyone through this beautiful piece of art.

*Hugs*

Sonya.