This is a really good story and I'm enjoying reading it so much. I do think you need to get a beta though as there a lot of spelling and punctuation errors - but still love the story! Also, the thing about the BJ and the maggots? So not true I'm afraid, it's an urban legend and I've heard a dozen variations on it. Does make a good story though...

nice chapter

HELLS-TO-THE-YEAH.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Lindsay

I would be mad if I was her too, Charlie has no right telling a secret that isn't his and Elizabeth may be right about how she acts but it is not her place to say anything. I am glad Edward was there but did she eat anything? She needs food.

I was excited to see an update! Looking forward to the next chapter too!

Lindsay

write soon

Oh my I didn't see this coming, well this should be interesting. I hope they pull out their heads soon.

very intersting story. Just got done reading all 11 chapters. I like the details. keep up the good work.

Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter! I just about died when he pulled her into the alley to expose her tattoo, agh, so hot! I can't wait to see what happens with these two!

Lindsay

Well of course Elizabeth and Charlie are probably engaged which means step-brother/step-sister! Ok, these two need to get it on, it's killing me! Loving this story!

Lindsay

Oh boy the sexual tension is unreal. They can't last much longer.

that was very good I am looking forward to the trip. OHh they are starting to show they like eachother.

This is an excellent story I really hope you don't wait too long. I love this story and can't wait for more.