hi. i didn't like this one too much. i think you could have done a bit more exposition using dialogue instead of outright descriptions of everything going on. that's just my opinion though. have a good one!

You had exactly the same thought as me. Only I made an amv, and you wrote fanfiction. (It's on youtube. I'm not advertising at all 0=D)

xD I also think this song fits Yuuram perfectly.. After all, Wolfram does everything for Yuuri, but Yuuri stills denies the engagement.

So I loved the fic. It's really fitting ;)