Hahaha! Great story. Karui is one of the FEW decent and respectable female ninja(only others being Sakura, Tayuya, Temari, Konan, and Tsunade) I like this pairing! ^_^

Isn't this also on deviantart?

Hahaha yes! WE need more Karui love out there! Frankly I think I'm becoming obsessed... Good job! This makes me want to write about her...

Not bad at all :D