 remey74 2009-11-26 . chapter 12wow that was awesome with the exception of richard |
 JamesTKent 2009-11-25 . chapter 12AGH!
You give me THAT image the night before Thanksgiving?!?!
Sheesh!
(Well done) |
 juniper617 2009-11-18 . chapter 11 I am enjoying the story quite a bit, so far; it's pretty well written and it's definitely engaging. But right now, I'm wondering why *everyone* is so quick to believe Zod over Superman. How could GNN run a story with those allegations when they can't possibly have corroborating evidence (because there isn't any). That could expose them to a lawsuit for defamation. And why are there no voices in support of Superman? Also, I'm wondering why the U.S. government in particular assumes it even has jurisdiction to decide the matter of possession of the Fortress; the Fortress is not in the U.S. (is it?), and the matter is between two non-U.S. citizens (so far as they know). That's a really *astounding* display of hubris on the part of the State Department. I absolutely can't see how they have that kind of authority over the parties or the issue. Still a good story! |
 JamesTKent 2009-11-17 . chapter 11It was delightfully true to the characters! Well done! |
 Candygurl101 2009-10-30 . chapter 1this is great just an idea i gt if u wanna use it or just be amused by it its fine by me . how u were sayn wen clark brought lois to his bed and she accepted giving him a son in kyptonian tradition they are married wat if something happens and now clark cant prove that CLARK not superman is the father of jason and he has to reveil to the world that lois and jason are his n all chaos break loose |
 Sreya 2009-10-06 . chapter 9Whoa, THAT'S a twist I didn't see coming! I don't think anyone thought of that complication with Richard impersonating Clark. |
 agentinfinity 2009-09-08 . chapter 8niakbor-
I hink you're doing a great job with your story and I would love to seewhere it goes.
Keep it up |
 drvr8 2009-09-07 . chapter 7oh never mind my chapter 8 review I finally saw the part about chapter 7 - and the tape recorder. This story is very interesting, interesting adding complexity to Zod and trying to redeem himself seems like an premise that could prove a drastic challenge to Kal-El. |
 drvr8 2009-09-07 . chapter 8Is the last part of chapter 8 lifted from a previous chapter? It reads really odd. I think something is screwed up with it? |
 Candygurl101 2009-09-07 . chapter 8awesome ! love the ending such a cliff hanger |
 ;) 2009-09-07 . chapter 7 nice. :P |
 My-Friend-KITT 2009-09-07 . chapter 7So, Zod didn't know that Richard was playing the part of Clark? Or did he and he just acted the part?
Hm
Pondering the possiblities...
Please continue when ya can. |
 annamariadv20 2009-09-07 . chapter 7Interesting!
Zod gives me the creeps, espacially when I don't know what he is up to. So please don't leave us in the dark for too long. |
 Candygurl101 2009-09-06 . chapter 7its good i like it the only thing that concerns me is the relationship of love w richard n clark/kal-el is undefined she loves clark but still w richard ? |
 Sreya 2009-09-06 . chapter 7*shudders* The interview with Zod is downright creepy. It's awful how megalomaniacs can justify themselves and sound perfectly reasonable.
Looking forward to the next chapter! |