This is really good !

Please finish!

PLEASE tell me you're going to continue! Please!

please continue

I just got through reading this book for my english class and I absolutly loved it! I really hope that you continue!

Great beginning! As your first story, it's really good!

You've got a good start here, and I am so glad I can finally get back into reading stories again. Yours is the first I've read in like ages, so this is really nice.

I like the beginning and how you have paralleled their lives. I am really excited about where you're going to take this story and how their lives are going to cross again.

Constructively, you need to make each person that speaks a separate paragraph, that way it's easier to read who says what. Otherwise, you have done a good job with this and I look forward to reading more.

Happy writing. :)

Yva J.

oh! im so happy someone decided 2 write another summer of my german soldier fic. it is such a good story. you are working well with it. i love that you let anton live and that we see form his perspective. keep writing! you are doing a good job!

i like this so far! keep writing, sounds like its going to be a good story:)