Wow! Kudos to you! This not only rocked but it was also pretty much the perfect ending. I'm afraid I'm a sucker for a happy ending or at least an ending where the characters I love are still breathing (oh yeah, fuck you Russel T Davies)so this ticked the boxes.

And it was so clever...really, they would do well to get you to write for the show. I think I'd have higher hopes for season 5 if they did!

Anyway, loved this, you did a great job! This chapter and the entire story were superb, really great stuff. I love all the emotion you get in there, how true you keep all the characters and your ability to hide a twist until it jumps out and hits your reader right in the mush. Thanks for the entertainment. Now, start on something else pronto. Your public need you.

I love wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff, with or without easter eggs. Beautiful story I love trying to see all the influences and 'nods' in your work, really good fun. Must go cos I seem to have misplaced my towel and that will never do. Big thank you

Two parts in one day - I'll have to go AWOL more often!

I didn't see this coming. I don't know what I was expecting at the end of part 3 but it wasn't this so I was delighted to start reading and see where we were.

I think this is really excellent writing, I can see everything in my head as I read and for me that has always been the sign of a good writer. I loved little Dean's courage and I also loved the picture you painted of this little family. It was fitting and believable and I can't wait to read more!

Hi!

Sorry I was so late with this, I was away unexpectedly and had no PC access.

Brilliant chapter! Christ on a bike, you know how to crank up the tension dontcha? Lol! Loved it, loved the boys trying to find the words to say goodbye, loved the humour, even to the end. We'd expect no less from our boys!! And as for the ending...I was practically falling off the sofa! Nice to see Cas back and loved the description of the demise of the hosts. And there's still more to come! Excellent! Although you said Wed and I don't see it - not complaining at all, you take all the time you need, just worried I might have missed it somewhere...

I'm interested to see what else you've changed on that night.

Way to crank up the tension! Now I have to bite my nails until Sunday!

Loved this, it was intense and gripping right from the get-go! The chemistry and emotions between the brothers is as commanding as ever, their need to protect each other written so believably and powerfully that you can see them, hear them as you're reading. Loved the way that Sammy was always a step ahead of Lucifer. Loved how Dean never stopped being the big brother.

The little flashes of humour, of sarcasm, are so true to the characters and they work brilliantly as a counterpoint to the drama of the unfolding story.

Brilliant stuff, thanks for a great read!

I'm really liking this story a lot! I can't wait to read the next part. I just have one little thing I want to say; I don't know if you noticed, but half the time the word "what" came up, it was misspelled. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I thought it was kind of aggravating, so I just thought I'd mention it.

Dear Bad Company wh*re - more please - Thank you

That was FANTASTIC !.
You're darned right it needs another chapter!.
If you don't continue this - I'll sick hell hounds on your back. So there. (You have been warned)
Now the question is - where will that black smoke go?.
Into Sam or Dean or maybe a new and improved Ruby?.
God I hope not Ruby!.
Anyway the suspense is killing me!.
So please don't make us wait too long to find out!.