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annie
2009-08-07 . chapter 4
aw that was cute! i liked it.
annie
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
hey i can make a movie about this!
blonddiva
2009-07-09 . chapter 11
Well the story was pretty damn good! I liked it a lot. I think it's cute that Anabelle and Hailey are dating now, that sounds absolutely adorable! I'm glad that James can accept that fact too as well. I mean how would he feel if he was with someone he loved and people didn't like them? He wouldn't feel all too chipper I bet. Anyways, I loved this story it was extremely good and I can't wait for what else you come up with soon!
BunnyHopster26
2009-07-08 . chapter 11
LOL I was about to pm when I read the last part of this chapter , lmao I pictured them crashing the wedding and reception lol. I could see Eitan, Yasmin, Sasha, and Dylan calling themselves pat of the band u there rapping and jammin lmao, the Yasmin, Roxxi,and Cameron went into Eitan's pockets and got the "Supplies" lol don't ask me what the supplies are because I'm not sue just know when they was done everyone was dunk covered in punch and rolling on the floor in the fetal postion laughing like the joker in the dark knight lmao ahhaahhaahaha.I cant stop laughing aw my lil riot starters. Ok r& done Pm coming ur way hon
BunnyHopster26
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
LMAO i was cacking up when She about the beat James with he cutches. LOL and of course Brayden would recommend that lol I want him to be my doctor. That what we did at my middle school, our music/gym teacher would be ** at us for now reason and expected us to do the right thing and listen then he told us to "go buckwild do as you please, I'm sure your parents who pay my pay check for this will app. it" We all did we ran around the gym singin the new song he was trying to teach us lol(it sucked by the way) then I went to him and was like "K.p(Damn that was a bad nickname and he was a bad teacher and wierdley obsessed with me uhg) lighten up they are paying for the specail classes(which they were) to have fun for like twice a week in school" I got all e'S IN HIS CLASS TO ahah he always kciked me out and threatened to call hom which he actually went to the phone and tried to do haha my mom hated him to(ALL the parents did lmao)


well anyways good chapter lol me loe story HORAY YAMI AND BUNNY CUZ I CAN TYPE LOL!
BunnyHopster26
2009-07-08 . chapter 8
Hm.ok last time I looked up this story had what? two chappies.NOW ITS 10! DANG Yami hon your GOOD lol. Well I do wonder where Belle is...Maybe she was trying to get with Damien? Have kids, to show a child how good a mom should be or how good paents should be?/ well idk im just thinking crazy you know lol. Well keep the the good work hon and pm me hon I got MAJOR NEWS
blonddiva
2009-07-08 . chapter 10
I thought this chapter was cute! I think Mr. Del Rio would make an excellent father. I think he can relate to children, teenagers so well and that's why he's so good with them. I thought it was funny when Anabelle accidentally drugged Hailey up a bit, haha. Well at least it wasn't anything too serious.

And overall I thought the chapter was adorable, anyways I can't wait to read more from you soon!
blonddiva
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
Wow, I'm glad to see that Damien found Anabelle too bad she got hit by a car. Ouch. But I'm glad to hear that she's well and alive and that's good. I find it interesting how Tiffany is sort of mad at Damien. I wonder if they'll be able to to talk to one another. And I find it cute how Damien's nephews flirted with Anabelle. Anyways, I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
blonddiva
2009-07-08 . chapter 8
Hm Roxxi really makes me upset. See high school students just assume and think they know all the answers. The only judge by what they see and don't look underneath it all. That just really bothers me and I'm really upset with her. I'm more upset with the principal. I mean of course nothing like this has happened at her high school which it shouldn't have but she still should have stopped and think. Sure it sounds a little suspicious coming from a student but ah, it just ** me off. And poor Mr. Del Rio, he must be pretty embarassed to have the cops almost arrest him because of accusations of him having sexual relations with a student. I'm glad that Roxxi confessed and I'm actually pretty glad that Anabelle spoke up to her. I'm glad that Damien is free though and is not going to be in trouble. And Damien is an incredibly nice person. If it were me, I honestly don't think I'd give a damn and I wouldn't buy the apology. I'd sue the hell out of them for all the money I can get so I never have to work again! That would so be me. I mean I wouldn't care who apologized all I'd see are dollar signs. Lol. I'm sorry it's just Roxxi and the principal have me so steamed.

And it just doesn't hurt Mr. Del Rio's reputation it hurts Anabelle's. You know students talk. I mean Anabelle wasn't sociable with the girls or the guys at all it seems but I guess it ruin's all chances now. I mean I don't think I could really trust them.

Now Anabelle is missing...Poor Damien he never seems to get a break. Honestly, I think Anabelle thought if she wasn't there in the first place this whole crap involving the police wouldn't have happened - so she took up and left thinking he'd be better off...I just hope Damien can find her. Anyways I LOVED this chapter as you can tell and I can't wait for more!
blonddiva
2009-07-08 . chapter 7
Well it's good to see that Annabelle is mature enough to accept Damien's wishes and just let it be put to rest. I applaud her for that, I know it's not easy especially as a teenager but it was nice. Also, the little kitten sounds really cute. I've had a couple pets here and there. A fish, a hamster and two cats. Now I'm pet - less. No more pets my mom says. :( That's why when I have my own place I'm getting two ferrets and I don't care who has a problem with it. I love ferrets, they're awesome.

And I thought the date between Tiffany and Damien was cute. Especially when they went back home and her sister was there. I loved how she tried to intensify everything between them. And I agree Tiffany's daughter is indeed very adorable and I'm glad Damien was so nice and sweet to her, but then it figures because he loves kids.

I also watched bits and pieces of the memorial and it's sad to see him go...

Anyways, I love the chapter and I can'it wait to read more!
blonddiva
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
Aw it seems cute that Miss Taighlor asked Damien out on a date but she was so nervous about it! Haha. It seems like Damien is quite the babe magnet in this story, he's got two ladies loving him. And I agree, Damien was right in what he did. I may sound harsh but when I read how Annabelle was coming on to Damien, well I sort of that she was a whack job. I know she's hurt but if she truly loved Damien she wouldn't do this to thim. She would respect his decision because if this happened he could lose his job and his license.

Anyways, I'm interesting in how this will play out and I can't wait to read more of this - it's turning out really good.
Bunnyhopster26
2009-07-06 . chapter 5
Hey I'm interested hon please continue. LOL y did I try and send this review and clicked the wrong thing and almost adopted an alien?! LOL the Internet is a strange place uknow 0
blonddiva
2009-07-06 . chapter 5
Well it was nice that Damien talked to Anabelle about her nightmare. I thought it was kind of weird that she kissed him...but I don't know at the same time. Good thing Damien didn't know about it...

I also thought the whole interaction between Miss Taighlor and Damien was very adorable as well!

Again, I loved the chapter and I can't wait for more to come!
blonddiva
2009-07-06 . chapter 4
I would hate to see my male teachers shirtless, they're all old and married. Hahaha. Anyways I guess it was a nice gesture of her to rub the cream in, I'm sure she enjoyed it more since she got to see him all shirtless and stuff. I also thought it was cute when Mr. Del Rio was singing and dancing as well.

Hm, Annabelle is developing quite the crush on Damien it seems like. Eh...a crush isn't too bad but I just wonder how serious it will get. I mean if anything did develop and people found out, Damien would get in so much trouble.

My mother's friend, who is indeed a gay male fostered three kids just to see how it would be like before he adopted. Well he explained the rules in his house and how he believed in physical discipline. Not beating or hitting. But a tap on the butt because he doesn't believe that time outs and taking away your privelages work - which it never did for me. If you misbehaved you got a tap on the butt. Not hard, just enough to make sure you never do it again and not enough to leave a mark. Or even a tap on the hand. So I guess when he did so, the kids told on him and he lost the kids and now he's never allowed to adopt again which is sad. Anyways, that situation sort of reminds me of this one for some odd reason. Anyways, I loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more from you soon!
blonddiva
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
Well it seems as somebody has a little crush on Damien which I find adorable! And I agree, the little prank Anabelle pulled was priceless. As for the girls, I don't know I don't think they should jump to conclusions like that. It isn't fair to Anabelle or Damien I mean you can't joke about stuff like that.

I love how Cloe pretty much got it right for the most part. Haha. And I loved the whole Romeo and Juliet discussion and I sort of agree with Roxxi in a way. Not completely, but a part of me does, haha.

Anyways this was a really good chapter and I can't wait for what else you come up with.
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