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Reviews for: Amortentia
Rippertish
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Great love making... I've must have read 100 BG stories. And I think this is t first that Buffy is virgin. It was good not having the tipical underage drama. It was good fun. And... Oh boy, Buffy knew what she was doing... Hihi
Found extra nice when u said "He rolled over onto his side as he held her to his chest, comforting her with soothing words." That's was very cute and Gilesy!
Again when he says: "Do u want me to go fast?"... Was very erotic and at the same time, Gilesy caring!
After reading so many fics, I believe there are some sentences when placed in the right time that just MAKES the difference in a fic.
Congrats. Hope u right more and more! ;) Giles and Repo rocks!
What about a Buffy/Repo one, with happy ending? Hm... If u need help... Cheers
RagamuffinSundrop
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
I love this.
Willow Grace
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Very hot! and beautifully done.
:3
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Nice stuff. I like Buffy taking the lead, though I couldn't believe she was a virgin considering how forward she was being! A note--um, the anatomy of the oral sex bit was a little confusing. The "nub" and the clitoris are the same thing so he couldn't have been doing what he was doing at the same time. I think you meant slit instead of **.

Goodness somebody wash my mouth out!

Still. Applause!
mmooch
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
So funny how you made this pre-emptive of his next visit! Or maybe he's hoping that they'll be too caught up in each other to notice what he's up to.
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