 SwordFeather 2009-09-13 . chapter 1Interesting beginning, but wimp is spelled wimp, not whimp. I think I'll be following up on this one. |
 Ilyasviel16 2009-09-06 . chapter 2oh..sorry to hear that...I wish you'd be able to fix your computer though... |
 Ilyasviel16 2009-09-06 . chapter 1it's really nice..I wonder how wolf looks like when he's on earth.. |
 Yuki 2009-08-27 . chapter 2 Please continue it. We are willing to wait until you recover the file (if that is at all possible), remember the plot you intended for this of until you get a new idea for this all together. This AU has been something that caught my interest and I would like to see it continue.
So please, there is no reason for you to delete. I know that you will be able to finish it if you want to. As Yuko from xHolic said, "Words are powerful things". So please have faith in yourself because we have faith in you. |
 BritneyCullen 2009-08-26 . chapter 2please continue the story. it has a good begining and i think it has so much potential. |
 shakuya 2009-07-18 . chapter 1 hello!
i have found this fic, and back then - i was quite interested with the summary and title. well, to be honest, i don't satisfied with what you have here. i mean, you weren't explaining anything. i know that yes, you have explained about some culture of yuuri's school. but you said there about the maou, or yuuri's live - some scenes here aren't fit (i think) for the shin makoku's usually of its tradition. who's the maou? does the maou has any retainers? or then, who his retainers are? do you want to make that shori and bob are the one that being the administrator? do the country is in peace with yuuri not being the maou? shin makoku isn't a peaceful place, you know.
sorry for the over loading question. i hope you would like to fix lots of plot holes over here. your fic could said as an AU, so please fill the explanation - and also make the things clear for the reader. i know that this must be really much to be added in the first chapter, but the background of this story isn't clear at all.
sorry again. anyway, do you mind to update this soon? though that there're lots of place here and there that i don't comfortable with, i'm also quite curious about whatever the plot that you had planned.
later i'll login and review by my account for sure :)
-shakuya |
 jenni.miko 2009-07-06 . chapter 1hmn...so yuuri goes to earth and becomes the earth's maou?? hmn...it would be nice if he were the maou in shin makoku. that would be even cooler. he would be good in swordsmanship and good in maryoku and rock his whole school. but let's see how things turn out of being maou on earth. thanks for the chapter. please write more. |
 yukifangurl31295 2009-07-06 . chapter 1hehe *evil laugh* I wanna see (or read) that red-headed fool's expression when he realizes Yuri is the Maou MUHAHA
*ehem* Anyway good story! Next chap! |
 hira-chan 2009-07-05 . chapter 1 hey.. this is a great fic.. hope you could update fast!!
Don't worry next time, I will sign in,, and submit a signed review.. ^.^..
I'LL wait for the next chapter!!
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Hiragizawa XD |
 SekhmetDaCat 2009-07-05 . chapter 1Oh, my God!
WERE U IN MY HEAD YESTERDAY!!
I was SO considering the possibilities of this happening!!
You bet, I'm going to be waiting for the next chapter!! |