LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! :D I SWEAR you have talent! At some points, it gave me BUTTERFLIES in my stomach! :D

Very cute. Your writing is good and I like how there wasn't a lot of dialogue. Great work!

~twiinklestar

AWEE. This was so cute. I totally enjoyed this, and I loved how there wasn't a lot of dialogue! I'm usually a talking person, but this seemed so personal and intimate and it was done really well. Good Job!!

Wow.
That was really, REALLY amazing!
I am definitely excited to read more of your stories!

Hey, um this is just a suggestion, alright so don't be mad at me,

Can you please read before you posted? No your writting is very good and it's because of the "love thing between Archie and Atlanta and it makes me think of something like rate those kind of stuff like "T" (13+) or "M" (16+) rated it looks more better with those stuff like that.

Sorry that was just a suggestion but other than that it was really great!

So you should feel extremely special. This is my first venture into teh CotT fandom and yours is the first story that I have read adn reviewed. Yeah, I know.

And you've convinced me to stick around.
=D
~playa

dude it got a bit wierd wheen he syarted touching her like that, maybe you should tone it down a bit? ;)

OMG, you notice that archie has a long neck to?!:D

This was beautiful. Wonderfully written with a great (and very original) fluff-filled idea behind it. :) I'm a sucker for just about any AxA fic, but this has to be one of the best that I've read! I especially loved the lines referring to Atlanta's dreams near the beginning. Fantastic job, and keep writing! You're an amazing author. :D