very good! i hope u will write more:)

Aw. This story was so cute... rely. Thanks for posting.

wow, you capture lana's personality in ways that i haven't been able to verbalize myself. those first few paragraphs are quite possibly the best description of her character i have ever seen.
so hat's off to you for that!
i never really entertained lana and pete as a couple, but you wrote them wonderfully :)

A great fic :coughsequelcough:. It's very hard to write a good Lana/Pete fic you nailed it. Good job and hope to read more of you soon :)

I liked this story. It's really hard to write believable Pete/Lana story. But you did it.

I loved this! There really isn't enough Lana/Pete out there. And this was really good Lana/Pete.