You're off to a good start. You're right in that it does take a different perspective from the usual stories, which is really interesting. Please get someone to help you edit though, since you could use a bit of help with grammar and spelling (e.g., BUMP not BUMB). Or at least spell-check. It would make your story much easier to read.

This story is a really good so far. I hope you end it in JH. I read what you wrote at the bottom, on why people never put anything about Sam, and I agree with you everyone mostly writes about JH. PLEASE update soon! Thank you :)

You have successfully made not want to murder Sam ... good job!
Please update soon!