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Ren! No! You'll totally screw over all chances you have with Kyouko!
Interesting plot. Keep it up :)

WAH WAY REINO WAY REN PLZ UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ

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Once again I love this side of Ren, because you can't predict what he is going to do next. Awesome writing.

Something about an evil Tsuruga-san is a major turn on.
It might be I like to see him loose it. Is there going to be any romantic involvement between Ren & Kyoko?
Maybe Ren lets loose some of his frustrations on Kyoko for a change? Mans up a little bit?
I'd like to see a fan fic with a somewhat less forgiving Tsuruga.
But that might be a tale for another time.

wow that was harsh

oh~ >.< ya! tell her Ren!

omg he's angry!! wow this is ren is really crazy!! really weird to read it. but i like it :P

keep up the hard work

Hello, MS and keep up the good work.

BTW, there is no need to apologize for late updates. Take your time.

... wha wha wha wha... what's gonna happen?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?! O geez, I haven't had this much of a cliffhanger from you in forever! I love it!...

Wonderful,but please tell me once the brainwashing wears off Ren is gonna kill Reino.

utterly shocking

please update

oh mai, an angsty story 8D
it looks fun, i'm looking forward to next chapters

What an interesting approach to writing the FANfic!

good my beloved Reino, you outdid yourself MWAHAHAHAHAHAH! Anyway I LOVE the story. write more. hows Ren gonna react to the hated Kyoko. I love Reino...and Ren...but not Sho...He sucks. Please Write More I wanna know what happens next