"the grinding sound of Dean’s CPR broken ribs"

Yuck! Ever since hubby's car accident, he has some ribs that pop in out of place and it just really grosses me out.

Another nice one! I like the apology at the end...would like to see that on the show ;).

Sam's desperation is overwhelming here, as is his relief...a lovley drabble.
Jane

who said that last line? If you cut out the 'but' at the start of the second line and take out 'the' captilizing 'Only' you can add in "I'm sorry," he repeated.
but i still really like this story. WRITE ON!

CPR-broken ribs? Ouch!

*offers tape and love*

Mady: As always- wonderful. :) Good detail, fabulous drama/angst and the unseen comfort after the seen hurt. ;) You have such a way with words and you made this little drabble come to life. Well done.

Oh, lots of angst in this one, between Sam's desperate CPR and his apologizing for hurting Dean. Really wondering what he did to the poor boy.
Sue

Two extremely powerful words there. Excellent drabble!

Nicely tense and intriguing! Wonderful drabble.

Very sharp and well-written!

Oh, nice moment! Poor Dean. Loved the detail of the CPR-broken ribs.