i so love this fic
and the song is amazing
i can so see this

I like it ^^ It's kinda sad, but also good. I don't know why it seems so sad... Probably because in the books Bella gets him, and you can just picture Jacob's heartbreak...

I just have one mistake that I would want to point out: "Her face was pulled back from her face today..." I assume the first 'face' was meant to be hair... I don't mean to be rude, just wanted to point that out. Sorry ><

But, Very good :)

interesting song choice. and like another reviewer said thanks for pointing that bella gets every guy incuded Edward in twilight. go jacob for fighting for your man Edward/Jacob forever.

very interesting, should continue to show what she decided to do

This tied in with the song really nicely, and it was a good role reversal between Bella and Edward.

M, now I need a sequel to keep me happy in which Edward tells Bella to fuck off :P

Very nice

Wow.. do you know what's freaky

I was reading this story and then my iPod shuffled and it turned to Jolene by Dolly Parton..

Freaky, right?

I like your story though.. it was very... different

I hate how Bella gets every guys eye in Twilight and I'm glad how you pointed that out in this story..

Well done and write more stories!

WTF?!?! im sorry but i laughed when jacob told bella that he had gay sex with edward. like i said im sorry but that was awkward/FUNNY!