Excellent usage of the song lyrics!
I really liked this story! Please write more Rick-Lisa stories! :)

What a unique and interesting take on this part of the story. Very good. I think this is more realistic than the way they showed it the show, actually.

I LOVED IT! Please write more Rick/Lisa fics! I've been waiting for one for so long. Keep writing to this story=)

well not bad. It is a good twist. I like it