I agree - your story deserves many more reviews! Your writing was enjoyable to read, and it sounded very similar to the books themselves. Great job, I really liked it!

Wow I absolutly love it, deserves way more reveiws!

I really enjoyed this. The way that you incorporated the words of the book was ingenious.

Very nice. Very, very nice. I haven't time to read all of it yet, but this is great! Deserves more reviews, I can't think why more people haven't reviewed. Keep writing, it's fantastic :D

This is EXTREMELY well-written and true to the style of Tolkien's masterpiece. Five stars!

I think your story was refreshing (give me a non-cheesy adjective!) in the fact that even though it uses excerpts from the original books, you have made it your own through your own take on what the emotions/character/feelings of all the people you wrote of. And great sticking to the language of Tolkien too :P