"my angle" aw so sweet lol

Very nice, it made me miss my boyfriend. I loved it, as for the ending I can imagine Marty saying that. It was perfect.

lol very cute - I liked the ending but the comment seemed more likely to come from Edwin while Marti danced around in excitement, but thats just my opinion. Still a very cute story though!

the end line should of been said by Edwin not Marti...I could not see her say something like that she is only 8. Good story though...Keep it up.

GOD JOB!! :D
i loved it, the ending was so sweet.
my angel... i loved it!
also, LOL. i lovd marti's line in the end.
priceless!

-unknowndreamer

Haha! I love that the McDonald-Venturi's think it'd be better for everyone concerned if they just jumped each others' bones instead of indulging in their particular brand of fighting (foreplay!)
And of course the actual realization scene was cute (although so typical that Derek wouldn't be able to school his expressions!) And then the actual kiss was really hot. I'm glad they finally got down to it :)

That was sweet, thank you for it.

Nice story and nice work!

the ending was AWESOME! Go marty

great story i so loved it/