It was nice short and sweet and honestly I never saw anything amiss so well done.

A wonderful story. Most people portray Aang as just some goofy kid, but you showed his wiser side. You really fleshed out these characters, and made the entire fic seem real. Great job.

This was adorable! Short, sweet, and to the point, I simply adored it! Nice work, hun <3

~Charlotte

Not bad. You showed the emotions really well. A bit sappy, but still good.

i just finished. that was very good, like a breath of fresh air, away from the action and stress. i'm still a zutara fan tho :):);)

very well written!! although i am a zutara fan ;) great job!

That was beautifully written! Many authors have written about Katara's confusion, but you managed to make the same plot unique and enjoyable. Well done! :D

:D I like how you wrote out how Aang felt like that - it felt very real. Great story :]

Morgan, I just want to applaud your finesse in writing this story. You have taken the basics of the Katara * Aang love story and fleshed them out in a manner no one else has done to date. Your mastery of emotions and describing them places you up there with Liselle129 and Liooness, in my humble estimation. They are two of the best authors on this site, where so many struggle to move past just writing words on the computer screen. I am honored to be able to review this latest story you have authored.

Looking forward to more from you.

Love it!
Keep up the good work! :)