|Reviews for Not Yet|
| Impaladreams 7/13/09 . chapter 1
Oh, so sad.
| Tribble Master 7/13/09 . chapter 1
it's not bad. WRITE ON!
| Port-of-Seas 7/12/09 . chapter 1
A pro wrestler? Geez, Dean, learn to pick your fights!
| snsw25kr14 7/6/09 . chapter 1
Aw...such a cute story. Nicely done. )
| Mad Server 7/6/09 . chapter 1
"Oh, right, friggin’ ghost of a friggin’ pro wrestler."
Deanie! That's gotta hurt.
I really like the way you stick with Dean's POV in this, bringing in different senses as they enter into his awareness - touch, then sight, then more coherent speculation which OK is not a sense but, you get what I'm going for, right? :) It puts us in his shoes in a really compelling way.
| PlatinumRoseLady 7/6/09 . chapter 1