| Reviews for Not Yet |
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Impaladreams 7/13/09 . chapter 1Oh, so sad. Sweet drabble jane |
Tribble Master 7/13/09 . chapter 1it's not bad. WRITE ON! |
Port-of-Seas 7/12/09 . chapter 1A pro wrestler? Geez, Dean, learn to pick your fights! |
snsw25kr14 7/6/09 . chapter 1Aw...such a cute story. Nicely done. ) |
Mad Server 7/6/09 . chapter 1"Oh, right, friggin’ ghost of a friggin’ pro wrestler." Deanie! That's gotta hurt. I really like the way you stick with Dean's POV in this, bringing in different senses as they enter into his awareness - touch, then sight, then more coherent speculation which OK is not a sense but, you get what I'm going for, right? :) It puts us in his shoes in a really compelling way. |
PlatinumRoseLady 7/6/09 . chapter 1Very well-done. |