No dear, I have one story with only two reviews on it...made by me. Also, I actually found yours was less graphic than most M rated stories on this site...you ought to read Constant Temptation by DragonRider40...now THAT is graphic!

Rapists have been known to be 'gentle' as many hold the delusion that their victims care about them. Obviously this in not true of ALL rapists, but Shigure was evidently that way...

At any rate, here is a review for you, and I certainly do hope that you continue with this tale! It has a good start to it, and if you want LOTS of reviews? Promise extra-length chapters if you have a certain number by a certain chapter...trust me, works like a charm!

All the Best,
~Seliphra

Everything is just like I predicted:bad and kind of boring!
You still have no idea about pregnancy and stuff:After 2 months Hatori could see the twins and their sex?drugs for a pregnant?
Why don't you do some reserch first?
Of course she must have twins, you planned to get both girls pregnant so Izole must have two brats...the romance between Haru and Kia is shallow.Haru was so in love with Rin and now...
I think I will not longer read this fiction.I just hate blackmail:Review or I will not update,this is really poor.
good luck

SHIGURE SHOULD BE IN JAIL DAMMIT!
Also, anti-depressants while pregnant?! No...I mean, I'M on anti-depressants and the first thing they told me was "Are you pregnant? Cuz these here pills do nasty things to un-born babies!"
Is Kyoto gonna adopt the twins? I hope he does...that would probably do a lot to help Iz, no?
And...Kyou's not in lock-up?

Hey I like a bad boy just fine, but anyone who rapes a girl is just...RAWR!
They need to meet Tohru too...If anyone could fix things, Tohru could *sweat* She is annoying, but at least not in a bad way, no? Do we get to meet the other horsy? XD I bet they'd kill me for sayin' that!!
Ouch...Izole-chan is having twins...off losing her virginity to rape! She needs to see a therapist no?

Ouch...yeah, I definately HATE your Ayame and Shigure...but WOW talk about a jail sentance! Assault, rape, forceful confinement and incest! Thats a good thirty years, and with the witnesses...*shakes head*
Oi vey, I hope everything turns out okay for them both...

DX
Aya and Shigure...undressing and thinking about sixteen-year-olds?!
My love for them has been skewered...XC
Good so far though, I'm on to read the next chapter...

i like ayame and gure-san as villians XD
but it was sweet hatori that was icing on the cake XD XD XD...m...icing *licks lips*

I liked it ayame seemed such a mean devil while gure-san is nice devil...if there is such a thinng XD

Hey Karou!! Great story! I love how you put Kiayame and Izole in that situation. Like I said, Shigure and Ayame are perverts! DX DX Anyway Keep writing!!
Hikaru ;D X3

ha ha...this is good! you said you need 5 good one, and it looks like you have 3 now...2 more!muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

hey this story was awesome! please write the next chapter soon. not knowing what happens next is killing me! :) :)

I don't like the idea of Shigure and Ayame beeing nothing more then perverted rapist.
How can it be that Kiayame and Izole knows Kisa (...Izole was EXTREMELY close to Kisa...) and Akito (...Akito is god and she'll get mad at you...)They even knew that Aki is a girl (no zodiac except the trio and Kureno are aware of Aki's gender)
The story isn't good develop and all the character are gruesome.
"They couldn't stand being in Akito' s power. So, they left."
That's all?Do know that the zodiacs member are summoned by Aki,do you?
The girl are only 16 and 17 (even if acted like whores),how long did they live alone?money?school?
Sorry but the story is just one of this Fruits basket-guy-raped-my-original-character.
1 from 10 points

So, how many reviews do you have?
...10...? Please hurry... lol
I love the pattycake part. xD